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Insurrection - Patreon Early Release

Hey, everyone!

Well, it took a couple weeks longer than planned, but the book is finally ready!

As usual, if you find any typos, please message me or post in the #corrections channel in Discord as soon as you can. The more eyes on it, the better!

Edit: 12/122 - Removed for Invasion release. You can pick up the book on Amazon or by pledging at a higher tier!


Comments

No problem! You can also bundle them all and send me a message if you want. Glad you enjoyed it! I think we caught one of those but not the other two! So I'll put together new versions soon. :)

Sarah Hawke

Also, sorry if this is considered spam, I have never been good with social etiquette and that extends to social media as well :).

James Garrett

pg 171 "legs when I landed, by my powers absorbed the impact" -> "...but my powers absorbed the impact"

James Garrett

pg 165 "the woman beneath me, and what was exactly I did" -> "...that was exactly what I did"

James Garrett

pg 159 "clearly meant even word" -> "clearly meant every word"

James Garrett

Loved it. Super fun. I think the dialogue is great, the suspense palpable, and the characters just keep getting better. I truly enjoyed this. Because I can't help myself, here are a couple of typos I found -

James Garrett

Yay! Can't wait to read this! Thanks!

James Garrett


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