Outcast: Cover + Prologue + Chapter One
Added 2018-04-21 17:12:16 +0000 UTCHere is the longer preview, as promised! What do you think of the cover?
And as always, feel free to share your thoughts on the chapter! I still have to write about a third of the book so there's plenty of time for changes.
Comments
That veers into spoiler territory. You'll just have to wait!
Sarah Hawke
2018-04-22 23:25:21 +0000 UTCWhat about the woman in Cole's dreams/nightmares? Or is that too much of a spoiler already :D
Linarian
2018-04-22 18:35:08 +0000 UTCIt should be finished early in the next month. I'll have another preview chapter or two this month. And yeah, this chapter with her was just a setup for a scene in Ch3 :)
Sarah Hawke
2018-04-22 15:49:50 +0000 UTCCool chapter. :D Any eta of the next one? Will Shandris be a possible interest?
Linarian
2018-04-22 15:39:30 +0000 UTCThat's...actually not a bad idea! I'll see what I can work out with future covers.
Sarah Hawke
2018-04-22 00:57:17 +0000 UTCI like the cover, will get to reading now. One thing I'd like to see is an unclothed version of the covers for patreon. Just more fanservice.
Linarian
2018-04-22 00:07:16 +0000 UTCI belatedly realized I should actually, you know, attach stuff to the post so you can read it. :P
Sarah Hawke
2018-04-21 17:20:45 +0000 UTC
