Wings of the Seraph Ch1 Preview
Added 2018-03-11 18:16:43 +0000 UTCHey, guys. So here is a rough draft of the opening chapter for the new book. It's pretty long (~6k) and I tried to include a little bit of everything - sex, intrigue, and action.
As you can imagine, this kind of thing is really important for a new series. Most people won't read beyond a few pages if they aren't already hooked, so I would really appreciate any feedback you have. The main question is: would this whet your appetite enough that you would want to keep reading?
Comments
I enjoyed the chapter. The character development is going well and my interest is piqued to see where this is going.
James Hepburn
2018-03-14 19:33:45 +0000 UTCThis month, not sure about a date yet.
Sarah Hawke
2018-03-14 18:27:38 +0000 UTCWhen's the book expected to release?
Linarian
2018-03-14 18:18:24 +0000 UTCGlad you liked it. :) My main worry is that there's not enough sexy action in Ch1, but as long as people are hooked going into ch2 they'll get more.
Sarah Hawke
2018-03-12 21:12:58 +0000 UTCThe opening was very yummy. I chuckled a bit when the main character got cockblocked by his partner. As for the getting hooked. That came when they were in the freighter leaving the planet.
Ronald Moore
2018-03-12 21:04:30 +0000 UTC
