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February Update

Hey, guys. Have you had a chance to finish TAP 6 yet? If so, let me know what you thought. :)

A few housekeeping notes here:


Comments

I appreciate it!

Sarah Hawke

I Understand, I just wanted to give my two sense, but I respect your decisions

Iassic

Thanks for the feedback! I'm considering shifting the PoV some. Overall I have received very few reviews/feedback on Huntress so I don't know if the change in perspective was well-received or not.

Sarah Hawke

TAP 6 was great, the actions was essay to see in my head, and I like how they all worked as a team. The surprise at the end I did not see coming so great work. I would have like more interaction between Valuri and Kaseya. I know that Kaseya loves her but they don’t talk to each other much other than sleep together so I would like to get more dept to it. So I was thinking for the next volume why not try going with multiple points of view between all three main characters. The huntress was great because it gave us more insight to Val’s character. We see that she has damage and general kind of wants to do right. And became easy to see why she fell for Jorem. So I think switching between the characters will gives us the readers more insight and fall for these characters even more. We can see what they all of think and feel about each other, and add to the emotional investment we have in them.

Iassic

Glad you liked it!

Sarah Hawke

love the sarcasm Jorem and Valuri give each other ... and they don't pull any punches on being honest ....can't waited for the next book ...oh and that space sex book 1 ...am totally going to buy ....


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