The Amazon's Pledge, ch1

Hello again! I hope everyone had a fun weekend. 

I made a lot of progress on the new story - the first draft is about 60% complete. It will be a little longer than the average DFF. With luck, I'll have it finished for you before next weekend. 

Here is a (long!) sample, as promised. Hopefully it whets your appetite for more! This is just a draft, so please let me know if you see any problems!

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The boat smelled of sweat and misery with just a hint of stale cheese. I had no idea why, since I knew for a fact that the captain had emptied the ship’s larder in order to squeeze in a few more paying passengers. The trip east from Vorsalos to Highwind was only three days, after all, and nearly everyone around me seemed to have smuggled in a bit of bread or salted meat. Perhaps one of them was responsible for the pungent cloud assaulting my nostrils. I was tempted to conjure up a gust of wind to clear the air despite the fact that exposing myself as a sorcerer would almost certainly get me mugged. Or worse. 

Grumbling under my breath, I flicked my eyes across the passenger cabin for the hundredth time this morning. After two days locked inside this wooden box together, I should have been confident that none of these people were disguised Senosi Huntresses waiting to capture me. Growing up inside a city that treated sorcery like a plague had taught me to be cautious, however, and the Senosi were cunning and patient trackers. I wouldn’t have been surprised if Grand Inquisitrix his one of her minions aboard every passenger ship departing Vorsalos. 

Still, if there was a Senosi here, she had done one hell of a job with her disguise. The vast majority of women on this ship were mothers with young children, and the rest were too old or too feeble to be a mage-killer. The only exceptions were the two amazons huddled together in the corner a few yards away. 

I turned and studied them. Like anyone else in the North, I had heard plenty of stories about the warrior-women of Nol Krovos, a large island some five hundred miles off the coast. Some people claimed that men weren’t allowed on the island at all, or that they were occasionally shipped in as “breeding stock” every few years before being dumped into the sea. I assumed that all those tales were preposterous flights of fancy from sex-starved Vorsalosian soldiers, but I didn’t know for certain. 

These particular women had largely stuck to themselves. They were both on the young side—I would have been shocked if they were much older than twenty—and they looked almost exactly like I had pictured them from the stories: tall and athletic, with hardened red leather breastplates and matching tasset skirts. I had no idea what the hell they could possibly be doing on a ship to Highwind, but every time I turned towards them my cock unwittingly stirred inside my trousers. I’d always had a weak spot for tough women, and once again I had to resist the urge to close my eyes and imagine what it would feel like to have their long, powerful legs wrapped around my waist…

By the gods, I really need to hire a whore when I get to Highwind. 

I sighed and slumped back in my seat. As embarrassing as it was to admit, I hadn’t been with a woman in over six months, and the loneliness was slowly driving me crazy. I occasionally went to sleep fantasizing about what the Senosi looked like under their tight leather armor, which was so fucked up it defied all basic sense and reason. Who in their right mind got hard thinking about the women who wanted to kill him?

Still, lust was probably a better vice than guilt, all things considered. My last lover had been thrown into the Inquisitrix’s dungeon for the crime of helping me, after all, and I wished there were some way I could help her. I also wished she were here right now, preferably on her knees with her ruby lips wrapped my throbbing cock…

“Are you an apothecary?”

My eyes shot open and I nearly fell out of my seat. One of the amazon women was suddenly standing over me, her bright blue eyes glimmering in the dim light. 

“I, uh...” I blubbered, clearing my throat. “What?”

She knelt down beside me. The sweet scent of her auburn hair—lilacs, perhaps?—flooded into my nose and made me forgot all about the mysterious stale cheese. 

“You carry herbs in your pouch,” she said, “and you have the look of an educated man.”

My mouth went dry. Barely anyone had spoken to me during the trip so far, and I hadn’t expected her of all people to buck the trend. “I, uh, no, I’m not an apothecary. I’m not much of anything, really.”

Her brow furrowed. From a distance, I had found her passably attractive; in close, I realized she was downright gorgeous. Between her high cheekbones, her full lips, and her sinewy, athletic fame, she could have easily been mistaken for a statue of the war goddess. I had never been so attracted to a woman who could break me in half. 

“Your eyes say differently,” she said, studying me. I couldn’t quite tell if she was sizing me up or planning to run me through. “You keep glancing towards my wounded sword-sister.”

“I…well, I just wish I could help,” I stuttered, clearing my throat again. In truth, I hadn’t even realized that her partner was injured. “As far as I know there aren’t any healers on this ship, but I’m sure there will be in Highwind.”

“I am afraid she will not survive that long,” the amazon said gravely. “Hestiah’s strength wanes by the hour, and at this rate I doubt she will live to see the sun set tonight.”

I swallowed so heavily I almost choked. I wasn’t a master healer by any stretch of the imagination, but I knew enough tricks that I could probably keep this woman alive—assuming, of course, that I was willing to expose my true identity and be branded a pariah as a result. Keeping a low profile had been hard enough before a beautiful warrior-woman had started questioning me at point-blank range. Now half the people here were looking in our direction. 

“I wish I could do something,” I murmured. “I’m sorry. Really.”

Her eyes returned to mine. A wave of guilt crashed over me, making me so nauseous I almost keeled over right there. 

“You fear for your safety,” the amazon said. “Your culture shuns sorcery, and you are worried about how the others will react.”

I froze in place. How could she possibly…?

“Nol Krovos is a land steeped in magic,” she went on. “I can sense it clinging to you, no matter how hard you try to conceal it.”

I glanced about the cabin to make certain no one else had heard her words. “Look, I want to help,” I whispered. “But this ship is filled with—”

“No harm will come to you while I stand at your side,” she said, placing her hand on my cheek and staring me straight in the eye. “I have been trained from birth to serve and protect those with magic in their blood. You need not worry.”

I let out a long, slow breath. Saying no to a beautiful woman was never easy; saying no to a beautiful woman whose lips were two inches from yours was essentially impossible. Especially when your cock was so hard it was on the verge of pressing against her leg. 

“All right,” I said. “I’ll see what I can do.”

I started to stand up, but she unexpectedly placed her hands on my shoulders and held me in place. “Know this, sorcerer,” she said. “If you save my sword-sister’s life, I will pledge mine to yours.”

“Uh,” I mumbled. “What?”

“With the gods as my witness, I vow to serve and protect you from this moment until my death.” She held me in place for several more seconds before she finally stood. “Now please, save her life if you can.”

“I’ll try,” I murmured. I stood from the wooden bench and shuffled across the row of passengers to where her friend was waiting. Her waning health was obvious once I drew close; her skin was incredibly pale, and her lips were almost purple. She eyed me warily as I approached. 

“Je spadal, Maskari?” she asked in a strange tongue.

“Kosee terah,” the amazon escorting me replied. She knelt down next to her wounded friend and glanced up to me again. “My name is Kaseya. This is Hestiah.”

“Jorem,” I said, forcing a nervous smile. “Jorem Farr. I’m afraid I can’t promise anything. I’m not certain if I’ll be able to help your friend here or not.”

“All we can ask is that you try,” Kaseya said. “The blood of the gods flows within you.”

I snorted softly. “That’s not how the people back home would describe it…”

I knelt down over Hestiah and gently pulled open her bandages. There wasn’t much blood; the chest wound she’d suffered had probably closed days ago, and they had obviously applied enough healing salves to mend the flesh. The problem was the infection beneath the skin. 

“Where did you get this wound?” I asked, an anxious tingle crawling down my spine. 

“We were attacked two days ago in Vorsalos,” Kaseya said. “A woman in black leather fired a crossbow from the shadows. We do not know why.”

“Black leather,” I rasped. “Let me guess: she was also wearing a hood and a red scarf.”

The two women shared a glance. “Yes,” Kaseya confirmed. “I managed to surprise her after her first shot. Our battle was brief, but I drove her back into the shadows.” She frowned. “You this woman?”

“Let’s just I’m intimately familiar with the group she represents,” I said, resisting the urge to swear under my breath. I had no why one of the Senosi would attack a pair of amazon travelers, but at this point almost nothing they did surprised me. The Inquisitrix was determined to rule Vorsalos all on her own, and her thugs were getting more and more aggressive by the month. 

“Can you help her?” Kaseya asked.

“I think so,” I said, nodding. “The Senosi typically coat their crossbow bolts with magical venom that prevents the blood from clotting. Even healing salves can’t stop it—they can seal up the flesh, but victims continue to bleed internally until they die.”

Kaseya scowled. “Despicable. What kind of enemy fights with so little regard for honor?”

“Most, in this part of the world,” I replied mildly. “The good news is that I’ve dealt with this venom plenty of times before. Just give me a moment…”

I took a deep breath and reached out to the Aether. Its energy coursed through me like an invisible current, heightening my senses and unlocking a nearly infinite well of untapped power. My hands began to glow a soft green, and I heard several stifled gasps from nearby passengers. Magic might have been a common sight in Highwind and the rest of the Northern Reaches, but even the Academy wizards shunned or ignored true sorcerers. Channeling the Aether directly was far more dangerous than diluting its power with arcane formulae and bizarre incantations, and they feared the consequences—with good reason. Some of them were also just jealous, of course. All I needed to do was concentrate to make my will manifest. 

“The poison has run deep,” I said, my eyes fluttering shut in concentration. “I can’t remove it, but I should be able to neutralize it.”

When I touched the wounded amazon’s flesh, I could sense every ache and pain in her body just as if I were experiencing them myself. The sensations allowed me to narrow down the infected areas and target them with a surge of restorative energy. Once the poison had been purged, it was a trivial task to stop the bleeding and start the healing process. 

I had learned this particular healing technique almost by accident as a child, and without it I never would have survived this long. Healing priests were rare and expensive in Vorsalos. Selling my services on the black market had been a reliable way to put food on the table.  

“There,” I breathed, reopening my eyes. Hestiah’s skin had already regained a significant amount of its color. “It will take a few days to completely flush from your system, but I don’t think there’s any permanent damage. Just make sure you get some fresh food and water when we reach Highwind.”

Hestiah smiled up at me, and her hand reached up and touched my cheek. “Thank you, moshalim. Kaseya was right about you—you do carry the blood of the gods.”

“I’m just glad I could help,” I told her, patting her hand before anxiously glancing around the ship. I suddenly wished I knew more about enchantment magic. Wiping the memories of all these passengers would be incredibly useful right about now…

“Maskari…” Kaseya breathed, touching my arm. The look in her eyes was so intense it actually made me uncomfortable. 

“I don’t know what that means, but you should probably keep your friend here company for a while,” I said. The best thing for me to do right now was get out of everyone’s sight. If there was a Senosi hiding on this ship…well, at least I would die after impressing a pair of gorgeous women. There were worse things to write on an epitaph. 

I patted both women on the arm before I stood and scurried across the passenger deck. The faster I got out of sight, the less likely any of these people would accost me…or so I hoped. Besides, I hadn’t visited the galley since yesterday, and even if this ship hadn’t stocked much food, I knew for a fact the captain had squirreled away some grog. 

Ten minutes later, I was loitering on the quarterdeck with a half-empty bottle of mysterious red liquor in my hand. The private cabins here had been reserved for passengers who paid triple for the ship, but thankfully no one had yelled at me to leave yet. Half of them were probably asleep, and the others were playing cards or whispering quietly to themselves.

I had just about finished the bottle when the deck door abruptly opened. Kaseya strode inside, her piercing blue eyes immediately latching onto mine. Strangely enough, she didn’t appear to be carrying her shield or any of her weapons. She had a folded red cloth in one hand and a leather pouch in the other. 

“Maskari,” she said. “You should not have run off.”

“Uh, you might not want to leave your friend alone just yet,” I said, wondering why in the abyss she had followed me. She had the same intense look on her face as before. “She will need more time to fully recover.”

“Hestiah is strong,” Kaseya said, approaching closer. “And I wish to complete the Maskari-Shan before we reach the city.”

I shook my head. “I don’t know what any of that means.”

“I pledged my life to yours if you saved my sword-sister. You fulfilled your end of the bargain, now I must fulfill mine.”

I took another sip from the bottle, trying to decide if this woman was crazy or serious. Or maybe both. 

“Look, you don’t need to pledge anything, sweetheart,” I told her. “I appreciate the offer, but—”

“The pledge has already been made,” Kaseya interrupted. She continued staring intently at me for a moment before she turned and peered into one of the nearby cabins. “We require privacy for the ritual. Come.”

“I don’t—”

Before I could finish, she pushed open the door to the nearest cabin. “My Maskari and I require this room.”

The two well-dressed men playing cards inside practically jumped out of their seats. “What the hell do you think you’re doing?”

“You may return to your game later,” Kaseya repeated, stepping through the door. “Leave, or I will remove you.”

“Uh, let’s not do anything hasty,” I said, scrambling forward and touching her shoulder. “I’m sorry about all this, gentlemen, but she’s not from around here. We can—”

“I will not ask again,” Kaseya said. “Leave.”

My breath caught in my throat. Forget the Senosi Huntresses—at this rate, the captain would just pitch us into the sea himself…

The two men stood and snarled like they were about to argue, but apparently the feral glint in her eyes convinced them otherwise. They grabbed their cards and practically lunged out of the room, muttering under their breath but still cowering when they passed by the angry amazon. 

“This cabin will suffice,” Kaseya said once they were out of sight. 

I glanced down at the empty wooden bench inside the cramped room. “I still don’t understand what this is about.”

“I will explain everything. Please, Maskari, have a seat.”

Her expression had abruptly softened. I didn’t see any trace of the anger or determination I had seen before. Now she looked almost…desperate. 

“All right,” I murmured, shuffling over to the bench. “But you’d better hope they don’t go complain to the captain.”

“If they do, we will make them regret it. An amazon warrior and her Maskari are more than a match for any of the dregs on this ship.”

I watched in idle fascination as she unfolded her red cloth upon the floor in front of me. From the golden tassels and detailed embroidery, I assumed it was some kind of prayer rug. She more or less confirmed my theory when she sank down to her knees on it a second later. 

“Moshalim salah, v’morth kraan Maskari,” she whispered as if she were reciting some kind of incantation. She placed one hand on each of my knees and closed her eyes as she repeated the incantation over and over. 

A part of me wanted to stop her and ask for a translation, but another part—a rapidly-swelling part—was far more concerned about the proximity of her lips to the growing bulge in my trousers.  

This is bad. This is really bad. She’s trying to perform some kind of serious cultural ritual here, and my cock is about to burst out of my pants and slap her on the chin. 

My throat went so dry I had to swallow three times before anything happened. The more her lips moved, the harder it became for me to resist imagining what it would feel like to slip my stiff member between them. The fact she was already on her knees just made the situation even more difficult…

Kaseya’s eyes finally reopened when she finished her incantation. “The gods have blessed our union,” she said. “We need merely complete the ritual.”

“How?” I rasped.

“You must don your tan’hema—your sacred ring.” She reached into her leather pouch and produced a silver ring crowned by a small red gemstone. “The longer you wear it, the stronger our connection will become.”

“Wait, this isn’t some kind of marriage thing, is it?” I asked, frowning. “I mean, no offense, but we don’t even—”

“Amazon warriors do not marry,” Kaseya replied as if it were obvious. “Our duty to defend and serve our Maskari leaves little time for anything else.”

“Uh…right,” I murmured, taking the ring. I could feel the latent magical energy in the metal, and the tiny fraction of my brain still capable of basic reason pleaded with me to give the thing back and get the hell out of here. I didn’t listen. I couldn’t listen, not with her perfect lips and perfect cleavage and perfect everything hovering an inch above my cock. 

“The tan’hema symbolizes your dominance,” Kaseya said as I slipped the ring onto my finger. “The tan’ratha symbolizes my submission.”

She reached back into her pouch and withdrew a golden, emerald-studded choker. Its magical aura was considerably stronger than the ring, and the metal was strangely warm when she laid it across my palms. 

“Place it upon me, and I shall be yours,” Kaseya said, stretching out her neck and lifting her long auburn ponytail out of the way. 

I stared blankly at her flawless skin, dumbfounded, until she arched an inquisitive eyebrow at me. 

“I, uh…” I took a deep breath and tried to swallow again. At this point, I was nearly convinced that this was all one big hallucination. But on the off chance it wasn’t, I really needed to get my shit together…

“Are collars not a sign of submission in your culture?” Kaseya asked. 

“They are, but…” I shook my head. “You are not my slave.”

“No, but you are my Maskari.”

“You keep using that term, but I have no idea what it means.”

Kaseya shrugged. “There is no perfect translation in your language. It is a term of endearment the Sisterhood bestows upon the male sorcerers we pledge to serve. I suppose you could say it means ‘bond-mate.’ But ‘master’ is also accurate.”

“You definitely don’t want to call me that,” I said. “I am no one’s master.”

“You can use whatever term you prefer. But you are my maskari, and I am your loyal servant. You will is my command.”

Once again I could scarcely believe what I was hearing, but I could tell from the sober look on her face that she was being completely honest. This beautiful twenty-something woman was willing offering herself up as some kind of bizarre slave/bodyguard to a man she had only just met. It was ludicrous. It was insane. Any half-decent, right-minded man in my position would have walked away and tried to get her some help. 

Apparently I was neither, because I promptly slipped the choker around her neck and snapped it securely into place. 

“It is done,” Kaseya said, smiling for the first time since I had met her. “I will not disappoint you, Maskari. I promise.”

I smiled back, still painfully aware of the tent in my trousers. “All right. What’s next?”

“The tan’ratha will take time to fully attune, but I can already feel an echo of your emotions.” Kaseya’s eyes narrowed in concentration as the emeralds embedded in her collar had started to glow faintly. “The sensations…they are almost overwhelming.”

“You’re telling me,” I squeaked. At this point my cock was so hard it actually hurt. 

Her eyes eventually fluttered back open, and for the first time she glanced down to the bulge a few inches beneath her chin. “You are aroused.”

No shit!

“Uh…sorry,” I managed. “It’s just, you know, this is all very—”

“You do not need to apologize,” Kaseya said. “It is my duty to relieve you.”

My mouth fell open again. “You can’t be…oh!”

I yelped when she abruptly pulled open the fly of my trousers and exposed my raging hard cock. I almost exploded right there, and then again when she curled her index finger and thumb around the swollen shaft. 

“Your stem is impressive,” Kaseya said. “I can sense that you have not spilled in some time.”

“Yeah…yeah you could say that,” I replied, my voice so strained it was barely recognizable. It was taking every ounce of self-control I could muster not to erupt all over her face and hair. 

“Do not worry. All amazons are trained to please their Maskari in preparation for the day we are eventually bonded.”

Okay, this this has to be a hallucination. I’m not this lucky. No one in the god damn world could possibly be this lucky…

“I…uh…” 

“Do not strain yourself,” Kaseya said, squeezing my leg with her free hand. “I shall relieve you now.”

After slowly stroking my shaft a few more times, she opened her red lips and wrapped them around the head of my quivering member. My hands grabbed the armrests of the wooden bench so hard I probably got a dozen splinters. I wanted to let myself go and flood her waiting mouth right then and there, but I kept telling myself over and over again that this was a once in a lifetime opportunity. A gorgeous amazon warrior was willingly and eagerly sucking my cock—I could live for a million years and this would probably never happen again. 

“That’s…oh!”

I tried to find the air to speak, but my lungs had apparently frozen in my chest. So instead I just sat there, breath shallow and mouth agape, as she lathered the swollen head with her tongue. I normally preferred it when a woman maintained eye contact while she pleasured me, but the way Kaseya was staring adoringly at my cock might have been even better. She was like a temple priestess worshipping an idol…or maybe a huntress yearning to devour her prey. 

“I am eager to taste your lifeforce,” she said. “Keeping her Maskari sated is one of an amazon’s most important duties. I promise, I will become more efficient over time.”

“Trust me…you’re doing fine,” I said between labored breaths. 

Her eyelids fluttered in concentration while she continued licking up and down the length of my shaft. “I sense your true desire now. You wish me to take you deeper.”

“What?” I stammered. “You don’t…oh, gods!”

I crumpled back into the seat when she abruptly lunged forward and inhaled my cock all the way down to the hilt. Her hands reached around to my lower back and clawed into my flesh, effectively giving her full control. I didn’t even need to thrust—between the iron grip of her fingers and the vise-like seal of her lips, she was able to fuck her own face with or without my help. Her throat was like a damned volcano, and I knew I would be able to last much longer. All I had to do was glance down and watch my cock vanish between her lips one last time…

“Shit!” I yelled so loudly my voice actually echoed off the wooden hull. I grabbed the base of her skull as I erupted, flooding the back of her throat with months upon months of pent-up frustration. Despite her best efforts to keep up, a few white streams leaked out the sides of her lips before I finished and collapsed.

When my mind finally returned to my body, I belatedly wondered if she might be irritated about my lack of warning…but then I watched in delight as she leaned back on her haunches and swallowed everything I’d given her. I don’t know what it was, but the sight of a gorgeous, powerful woman thirstily guzzling down my seed had always made me hard. It was probably just another of my many character flaws.

“By the gods,” I breathed, rubbing the back of my hand across my forehead. “That was…I don’t even know what to say.”

“You do not need to say anything,” Kaseya said, pushing the last few strands of seed into her mouth. “You are my Maskari now. It is my duty to aid you whenever you require relief.”

“Right…” I murmured. Sooner or later, I knew I would start to feel guilty about all of this. But right now…well, right now I was too busy demonstrating yet another character flaw.

“I should return to Hestiah now,” Kaseya said, standing and retrieving her prayer rug. “Once we reach Highwind, you shall have my full attention again. I am sure you will require further relief.”

“Yeah,” I breathed, eyeing her body up and down and wondering for the thousandth time how she could possibly be real. “You’re probably right.”