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Overcorrective (story)

Noam, who has been a failure in recent years by not deigning to find employment and focusing on his video games and hedonistic life since he left college, is causing more and more concern to his mother Myla, who doesn't know what's wrong with him and how to remedy his lack of ambition in this life. Furthermore, Myla not only sees Noam's lack of ambition as a problem, but is also concerned about how Noam's lifestyle is affecting his health. He's just sitting there all the time playing video games, sitting with bad posture in his chair, eating pizza lying on his bed all the time (which is terrible for digesting food), and his room has turned into a garbage can with trash and clothes lying around, which could lead to bacteria and disease.

Myla believes that perhaps Noam needs professional help in order to improve his lifestyle, although Myla would be grateful if such professional help would also help Noam find a new direction for his life. Myla has heard of a famous and respected psychologist and psychiatrist near where she lives, everyone speak wonders about him and how he has helped them to improve their lives or those of their loved ones in one way or another. That's when Myla decided to send Noam's medical file to the psychologist/psychiatrist to have therapy with him so he can change his life for the better.

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A week after Myla sent the papers to the specialist's office, Noam's file has been mixed up with many other files of other patients because of the specialist's secretary, who has not changed glasses for many years and maybe needs a new prescription due to the increasingly recurrent situation, although it is not something that matters much to the secretary, after all she goes to work every day for a miserable salary and not much motivation. In this particular case, Noam's file was exchanged for that of another boy awaiting gender reassignment.

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One day later Noam finally goes to the specialist, he is not sure why he is there, as his mother told him that they were going to buy a xbaks720, the latest next generation console that has recently come out, but at the last moment his mother told him that they were really going to a specialist to help him improve his lifestyle and kicked him out of the car, even though he considers that his life cannot be better than it currently is and that it should not change, well, who would not want to live the rest of his life just playing video games and eating pizza every day? Noam thinks that he is living the dream of many boys at 32 years old, so he thinks that everything is fine with his life and nothing should change as long as his parents' pocket can afford it.

However, the specialist begins to probe and question Noam's motivations, appealing that, well, isn't it boring to do the same things every day, over and over again and in a never-ending cycle? The specialist thinks that Noam should perhaps try something different in his life, something that will fill him with freshness and new challenges, and tells Noam that he, the specialist, will be able to help him find himself again. In the background, the specialist wonders why Noam seems so conformist with his current reality when the file says that Noam wants to be sex reassigned, and the file can't be wrong, can it?

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Then the specialist takes a pocket watch and starts moving it in front of Noam's eyes from side to side, over and over again without stopping, while instructing Noam how to take a deep breath to relax and enter a deep trance state. Then the specialist says to Noam: how about trying dressing differently? As Noam listens attentively in a state of deep relaxation on the verge of slipping into a pleasant trance. He just needs to inhale, relax, hold his breath and exhale after five seconds, inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale, inhale, exhale... Then the specialist cracks his fingers and Noam falls into a deep trance.

A long time later, which can be hours, days or weeks, Noam wakes up confused. There is a lot of fuchsia-colored light that complicates Noam's vision. Then as Noam's vision begins to stabilize, while he feels confused and dizzy, all he sees are endless spirals everywhere on screens surrounding him, while a deafening sound saturates his mind over and over inviting him to be more feminine.

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A long re-programming time later (time that was probably weeks of day and night programming), after Noam has become totally absorbed in his thoughts, thoughts that have been reduced to repeating himself cyclically about the goodness of being female, the specialist brings out a bottle of green pills to help Noam get to know his "new self" quickly.

The specialist instructs Noam that he only has to take one of these pills a day and come in for up to a month to monitor his overall progress, and also visit him every week to see what stage of metamorphosis progress he is in.

This is how Noam's metamorphosis continued to transcend beyond his mind. After a week his body began to look more delicate as his breasts began to transform into beautiful, round, even breasts.

From the second week his hips began to accentuate while his manly member began to decrease in size each day until finally disappearing, and from the third week his hair began to grow. By the fourth week Noam was quite a young lady with a new mental configuration and ready to live her life as one.

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Weeks later, when Noam has returned home, Myla sees how Noam has started to generate income being a twitch e-girl and notices the huge changes that Noam, whom she now calls Naomi, has experienced in her life, because not only has Noam's sex changed but also his habits have changed, because now he only eats healthy things to maintain his slim figure, he sits in a better posture in the ergonomic chair and his room is arranged and clean to give a good image to his viewers. Definitely it was not the change that Myla thought, but if the change is for the better, and if Naomi feels good with that change, Myla thinks that the specialist has done a good job, even though she thinks that maybe they should visit the specialist soon to ask him some doubts that Myla has about the transformation process.

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A few days later, Naomi is back with the specialist, and this time she is there with her mother. As it happened last time, Naomi does not know why she is there or even does not fully understand what they are talking about since they use a language full of medical technicalities that Naomi does not understand (since some consequence of the transformation process was to be diminished in her mental capacities). Meanwhile Myla asks about the side effects of the transformation treatment to the specialist.

The specialist, who by then already knew that the transformation from Noam to Naomi had been accidental fruit of another exchange of files, offers Myla a "relax pill" alluding to the fact that Myla looks somewhat stressed by worrying about those issues, while he thinks about how to free himself from that situation

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Myla, who would not accept to take an unknown medicine if any other person gave it to her, since she considers that the specialist is, therefore, a professional in psychology and psychiatry, decides to trust him without hesitation, ingesting the fuchsia pill. It is then that Myla relaxes in an exaggerated way from one moment to the next, being plunged into a deep trance due to the properties of the fuchsia liquid that has been synthesized in that pill. Moments later Myla and Naomi were being packed by a concerned specialist to be sent to the figurine factory. The specialist thinks that there have been too many mistakes with patient records lately and that he may have to change secretaries soon before he has to "tie up loose ends" to avoid going to prison for medical malpractice.

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Some time later, Myla and Naomi were on a moving belt being processed to be turned into figurines, receiving a bath in a special resin and then being dressed by robotic arms. For some reason, the factory's artificial intelligence believed that Myla was younger than Naomi (as if Naomi was Myla's mother), and thus dressed in a school uniform while Naomi was dressed in a more daring outfit (a leotard).

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Towards the end of the process, both were shrunk by a shrink ray and duly packed. Weeks later they appeared in a store to be sold. Again, the specialist has dodged any claims or involvement in the file exchanges, so one might think, if these mistakes happen very often, how many figurines in that store were in the past people who received wrong psychological and psychiatric treatment before? And now they are just being sold all of them for $60.

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A long time later, when they have already been bought by an enthusiastic collector, they are only left to serve their owner for eternity while they look good and are dressed and cared for by him, while their minds are drowned and suffocated in a cyclical pleasure that conditions them to be dolls every day.

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