The Roots (Pt. 2)
Added 2024-08-11 23:30:54 +0000 UTCThe end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is never the end is... (16,400 Words.)
https://wanderinginn.com/2024/08/11/the-roots-pt-2/
Password:
doYouHearIt
Comments
Where do you enter the slam password? I just get links to “become a patreon” when I click the word and end up back here. Obviously I’m behind because no place to enter a password to 2 #1
Sarah
2024-08-18 05:07:39 +0000 UTCI too, missed Part 2-2 initially.
Splutty
2024-08-14 11:20:48 +0000 UTCPassword is: slam All lower case, had the same issue and experimented till it worked.
Pherosis
2024-08-14 04:13:23 +0000 UTCWhat was the password? I don't see any author's notes. Just comments.
Rico Anthony
2024-08-14 02:01:24 +0000 UTCThank you!
Stephanie Creasy
2024-08-14 01:32:26 +0000 UTCpassword is in the author's notes at the bottom of The Roots Pt. 2, it's different than the chapter password
Ennesby
2024-08-14 01:30:46 +0000 UTCI am as well
Jacob Dayley
2024-08-14 01:28:57 +0000 UTCI just realized the link on "slam" and the password doesn't appear to work. Anyone else having this issue?
Stephanie Creasy
2024-08-14 01:23:52 +0000 UTCI strongly suspect that the [Palace of Fate] visions only begin at the start of this chapter - things like Mrsha falling on her head line up with things said in Roots pt 1 by the Fae, and I don't notice any weird inconsistencies in the previous chapters, like Mrsha knowing the Grand Design's name instead of calling it the system.
Grey
2024-08-13 15:35:35 +0000 UTCAll the data the Grand Design appended was just vanishing into a void. It tried to fix it three times—and Ryoka’s entry wouldn’t reappear or come back. It couldn’t even make a new file on Ryoka. In the end, the Grand Design created a ‘Ryoko Griffin’ entry and logged everything new in there. If it had to reinstate her level…
Red
2024-08-13 02:29:20 +0000 UTC9.61 G lower half
Red
2024-08-13 02:29:06 +0000 UTCPretty sure that’s in an alternate fate?
Tartlet
2024-08-13 02:13:44 +0000 UTCCan anyone point me to the part of the story where the Grand Design labels Ryoka "Ryoko"? I know it can't see her clearly but I thought it might know her name from other people's conversations.
Scott Soper
2024-08-13 00:57:34 +0000 UTCUnexpected and fascinating.
Charles T Martin
2024-08-12 23:12:26 +0000 UTCWhen Mersha got her levels revoked I got legit mad…talk about proverbial blue balls!
Jordan
2024-08-12 22:10:35 +0000 UTCHere is hoping that Mrsha get her Levels back just to save her mom and Rags.
Robert Johansson
2024-08-12 21:37:38 +0000 UTCOnly she can save Lyonette now
Rukshan
2024-08-12 19:43:20 +0000 UTCMrsha, the Great and Terrible
Rukshan
2024-08-12 19:34:44 +0000 UTCWell this is downright fantastic.
Larc
2024-08-12 16:30:52 +0000 UTCFirst of all I want to say I've Loved all of this story you have a very unique writing style and I cannot wait and I cannot emphasize this enough for the next chapter and I can tell you love your clip hangers when I got to the end I was like bloody pirates I say that with all love by the way can't wait to read the next one
toni990
2024-08-12 16:18:14 +0000 UTCI had so many feelings throughout this chapter. Very discombobulated but eagerly awaiting the continuation.
Melry
2024-08-12 16:10:35 +0000 UTCOk. Is this a spoiler? Click the frickin hyperlink!!! Click slam. I almost didn't see that.
Fitty Sebum
2024-08-12 15:24:47 +0000 UTCwow great chapter! I can't say I saw it coming but that's no surprise maybe in a reread. I absolutely loved it
Valmorian
2024-08-12 11:01:26 +0000 UTCWho needs drugs when there are chapters like these?
Edda
2024-08-12 10:30:41 +0000 UTCIt was great, that one liner was incredibly terrifying. Didn't expect it, even though there were so many hints
Miles Kidder
2024-08-12 08:07:59 +0000 UTCOne chapter is not enough is not one chapter is not enough....
Lawrence
2024-08-12 05:26:04 +0000 UTCReminds me of the Unrealized Reality episode in Farscape. Nice Stanley Parable reference, too. Looking forward to more!
Lawrence
2024-08-12 05:25:17 +0000 UTCShe also refers to Ryoko being “the most correct about faeries”. “Ryoko” is the name that the grand design uses for Ryoka
Craig
2024-08-12 03:31:18 +0000 UTCWelp that was a bit of a mindscrew
Mrs. Murdy
2024-08-12 03:26:39 +0000 UTCThank you
Jordan
2024-08-12 03:25:39 +0000 UTCTrama for everyone!
Anonymous
2024-08-12 03:14:33 +0000 UTCMrsha casually mentions the “grand design”
Red
2024-08-12 02:47:29 +0000 UTCStanley parable reference hell yessss. This chapter was awesomeeee! So excited for the next chapter
Rados
2024-08-12 02:28:48 +0000 UTCWhat an incredible chapter! The way you make transitions to the next part and the twist at the very end. You are truly an amazing writer!
Brian Chen
2024-08-12 02:02:34 +0000 UTCStanding ovation. Absolutely brilliant.
Red
2024-08-12 01:56:57 +0000 UTCThrew me for a freaking loop. Perfect way to make the readers figure it out themselves with a cliffhanger on the third one
Jordan
2024-08-12 01:30:52 +0000 UTCiHeartItSoHard
Richard Fields
2024-08-12 00:55:40 +0000 UTC"Ryoko" Uh oh.
Dan Lewis
2024-08-12 00:41:49 +0000 UTCClever sonofagun
Richard Fields
2024-08-12 00:28:34 +0000 UTCyou absolute goober you got me
thomas j walters
2024-08-12 00:15:29 +0000 UTCAll work and no play makes Homer something something...
Scott Soper
2024-08-12 00:03:27 +0000 UTCGracias
SirThomasXVI
2024-08-11 23:33:53 +0000 UTCBut is this the song that never ends?
James Getgood
2024-08-11 23:33:47 +0000 UTCSomeone’s been playing the critically acclaimed Stanley Parable 2 Ultra Deluxe edition. Should’ve won game of the year.
JumpingPotatoSack
2024-08-11 23:33:04 +0000 UTC
