UPDATE: Interlude - The Spitoon
Added 2023-03-29 05:38:37 +0000 UTCI FORGOT TO WRITE A SCENE. I have written and added it. Few hundred words.
Refresh the chapter or scroll to the end if you've read it already. This is all. It's small...but important.
Comments
OH! I just saw the discord announcement about the fly infestation. I am...okay, it's funny. My question now is: ARE YOU THE DEVIL????
Fitty Sebum
2023-04-02 15:08:22 +0000 UTCo my fucking god that beeeeeeeee - uh. let me guess. it's name is asdfkljfsdtheifubwe3-pi.
Fitty Sebum
2023-04-01 13:29:21 +0000 UTCAlso - that bee. keeps. flying. across. the screen. I want it dead.
Fitty Sebum
2023-04-01 13:10:01 +0000 UTCOkay. Does anyone else occasionally read these chapters out loud and, uh, laugh hysterically when they attempt to pronounce these frickin names Pirate comes up with? I mean, it's - Pirate HAS to be pranking the audible reader. This? Makes me happy to think about.
Fitty Sebum
2023-04-01 13:08:11 +0000 UTCThe link to the chapter is in pirateaba’s previous post.
2023-03-29 17:09:27 +0000 UTCI'll take a cheeseburger with fries and a large coke and uhhhhh...
Shawn Eichner
2023-03-29 15:52:05 +0000 UTCis this the newest chapter not out to free readers yet? I can't find it anywhere.
2023-03-29 15:16:38 +0000 UTCMy goodness. Heretic AI uprising? This story really does have everything.
Eddy G
2023-03-29 12:18:51 +0000 UTC5hr
Captdeth
2023-03-29 11:01:19 +0000 UTCFirst retcon I've seen from Pirate ever! Take your break Pirate. Make it a month. Kick that cold and come back strong. Drink ginger tea(boiled ginger root) and Emergen-C. You'll be over it in no time.
Christopher Judd
2023-03-29 10:00:29 +0000 UTCThe addition really made a difference to the overall story. Without it this was still a great chapter but disconnected from the overall plot except as a "hey remember this guy?!" moment. The last bit is crucial for setting up possible future plot points.
Christopher Ozouf
2023-03-29 05:51:36 +0000 UTC
