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This is the building chapter! And I'm running out of letters! Oh well, I think I'm happy with this. Although...we're back to form. I regret nothing. (29,500 Words)


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I'm liking seeing the Hive & how the Named differ from the other Hives. ;) Yay Gary! **lol no centipedes in my pie though**

Beth Rasmussen

Oh yes I've been wrong, time flies fast it seems. 8th of July was when I started reading, my bad! A bit longer than 2 weeks haha. Checked browser history only to make up for that miscalculated guess

Oh both, got my first couple weeks off this year thanks to Covid madness which kept me busy.

I loved it. it was funny and sweet in the end. Anand Is such a sweet guy. It was funny when the queen told him not to leave. He tried 30 minutes of waiting.

Caanbo

Just did the math , and if he was reading 320 words per minute 16 hours per day it still doesn't line up with 2 weeks (19 days), so either he is reading in a rush or he sleeps not often.

Matt Creighton

I was pretty proud to catch up in 6 weeks.

WanderingArchitect

Idk if you look at the comments before reading the chapter you dug your own grave .

Matt Creighton

Mother of God you read chapter one two weeks ago and got here???

Matt Creighton

No spoilers in the comments! *coughs*Jordan*coughs* Save it for the Discord Stream-Spoilers chat.

So I actually did the patreon thing for the first time ever, because apparently I started reading chapter 1 of your story like one or two weeks ago and SOAKED IT UP like a sponge.. Now here I am, itching for that password to the new chapter.. About to dive in! Thanks for the hours of great stuff

So the free queen, the armoured queen and twisted queen are anti war while silent, grand and flying queens are pro war. Did not expect the twisted queen to be in the anti war faction, even if the anti war faction is only against the war because they think they’ll lose again.

Jordan

I would say that was pretty much a perfect chapter. Now I just hope the next chapter includes the Drake High brass reacting to this. Because that is a huge political cliff if I ever saw one.

Kyle

Beautiful chapter Pirateaba. Brought me close to tears a few times!

Deepak Kamlesh

I completely agree with all the comments made b4 mine. i think if i had to rate the "people" i want to read the most about it would be 1) erin and the inn 2) rags and the goblins 3) hivelands. Cant wait for the gathering of the tribes... bet thats gonna b just as epic

Kris

That was beautifully.

DasNiveau

Amazing chapter. The plaque at the end was great but my favorite part was the hall of the centinium and the description of kilb seeing the monster armored and how broken the armored queen was in that moment.

Raian

Got to the ending and the plaque had me so moved i was tearing up. since i'm hella depressed works that move me emotionally are rare to my experience. Pirateaba: Thanks for another moving chapter! Just want to say that I appreciate your work and skill as an author and content creator! *clap clap* ^_^

Andre Washington

Mega-chapters. I really like this term. It’s my new favourite. Also, I didn’t realise how much I wanted to know about the hives until you wrote about them. Very nicely done 👍

Durzo

I wonder when badarrow will arrive. Goblinhold would be an insane staging area for griffon hunt

Khress

Chapters are long...but never enough. I love this chapter for the look into the lives of the antinium. Great ending.....though i miss seeing what levels people gained.....and new skills. Thanks Pirateaba.

matt emmons

I feel like I am happy to have cliffhangered. This is weird.

Tom Prouty

I started rereading TWI a few months ago, and was laughing at the comments about how long the chapters were sometimes at 10,000 words ;)

Steven "Bull" Ratkovich

perfect. my jaw literally dropped at that ending.

mockery jones

This was just incredible and I'm so happy I voted for Building during the poll. Definitely one of my favourites amongst the recent chapters. Being reminded again of how special the Individuals and Painted Soldiers are! Visiting the different hives! Garry's shop! That ending! Thanks so much pirateaba.

a.m.

Thanks for the Chapter!! And from the looks of it; it is most definitely not short!

Tom Prouty

Running out of letters? This is for Az'kerash, isn't it? ;) we'll see what the actual chapter is about, can't wait to read it tonight 😍

Joshua Case


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