Story Poll - July 2020
Added 2020-07-26 05:35:42 +0000 UTCIt's me! I'm enjoying my break for the last...day...I have left! But I realize again that we're coming up on the end of the month.
Well, there are less chapters because of my (extremely helpful) monthly break, but that does mean the polls matter...more. So for this one, I thought we'd do a genre poll.
Each option isn't much of a side story since as you know, everything relates to everything in the story. It's rather a theme without focusing on a character. Someone suggested trying that, so blame them if you hate it. We'll see how this poll does!
As always, there will be some...spoilers...but they'll be very vague for acid+ patreons. And you know how they lie. Vote for what you believe in and thanks for reading and supporting the story! We'll be back to the story soon! I've already good good ideas for the first chapter back...
Comments
Travel, wanna see the gnoll plains and the other Walled Cities that Erin has invites to see.
CALiGeR
2020-07-28 20:51:06 +0000 UTCYou mean athletes foot?
SabreToothTortseshell
2020-07-28 03:09:57 +0000 UTCTravel makes me think of the [Coachman] and , The All Roads Lead to Manus Travel Agency....
Paul Jan
2020-07-28 01:01:44 +0000 UTCSort of right? Remember, tons of monsters, even the sentient ones have magic or abilities or super(insert thing) built in. I.E vampires, or the more intelligent undead. So she has essentially traded abilities and leveling to use that system. Except all she has is some pretty basic wind control and despite wanting to improve her self sufficiency, I.E potions, caltrops ect, she has stagnated. Im just saying, in the current vvote, regardless of the outcome, it would be nice for her to develop more than just some social skills and a little empathy.
Raymond Powers
2020-07-27 04:47:10 +0000 UTCI think that understates the case for Ryoka She has learned to do magic a different way than anyone else in the world. Her path is to half-fey wind-sorceress and there appears to be no one else on the planet who does that. Only Teriarch might have a clue -- or Ivolethe coming back and telling the daft bint what she should be doing.
Kyle Aretae
2020-07-27 02:28:52 +0000 UTCI agree with all of that. However, my point is not if she should or should not fall into the ability system. Ryoka has already chosen a separate path. That has been established. The reasons why have been established. But what is the moral of her story and her choice? That you can stay out of the ability system as long as you convince people in the system to do work for you? That does not need a story. That concept does not need a protagonist. And if that was the intent, why push that on the least likely character to ever accept that secondary subservient role? For Ryoka to stay relevant, she either needs to 1. Progress in her chosen path 2. Give up and gain abilities 3. Find a totally new path 4. Constantly rely on others to accomplish anything. This is my point. #4 just doesn't fit the character we know as Ryoka. So, when is #1 or #2 or #3 going to happen? That to me is the larger story here. in the greater story arc, you have- The antinium evolution to fight a god. The war with demons on Rhir The introduction of earthers and what created this system in the firstplace There are tons of smaller story arcs The weakness of the current mages Gnolls becoming mages The goblins becoming an accepted race. Ect, ect. But Ryokas story consists of the ability system, how it was made, where it comes from and why did ivoleth agree she avoid it? To me, it is one of the biggest story arcs and has been static for a long time. I would just like to see that story arc advance. Almost as badly as I want Erin to meet the titan. :P
Raymond Powers
2020-07-26 21:50:32 +0000 UTCAtlus you are ruthless
Matt Creighton
2020-07-26 21:37:03 +0000 UTCBut thats the way of morals and taking a stand. She sees something in the leveling system as malicious. Otherwise in places where warlords reign, were gangs/cartels run the area, you'd just see everyone join up with them because their personal power and safety would grow, but they don't, because malicious system is malicious despite it being a boon if you accepted it. This tracks with many many heroes throughout history, and I think it works well and in line for her character. Sometimes it's not about power and capability. Sometimes it's just about resisting it because you're sure it's the right thing to do. Beyond that... being hyper intelligent doesn't overwrite hyper stubborness, so she's got two things going against this thing.
SimpleSeraph
2020-07-26 19:50:44 +0000 UTCHonestly. I don't mind too much which one of these wins. I just hope we can get a feel good chapter after some of the recent dark ones. Not that I don't enjoy the dark but I like light humorous chapters that just make me smile too.
Matthew
2020-07-26 17:16:23 +0000 UTCThat is kind of the point. She doesn't trust the system, and that was made clear. ivoleth even supported her distrust and she has struggled with her choice as she watches others develop past her. There are numerous chapters (after this distrust was established), where ryoka struggled with the wind to develop control. But without ivoleth she has stagnated. It is not about personal power, it is about her ability to defend herself and avoid being defenseless- thus all the potions and caltrops. She was the single most capable earthier, and now she is one of the least, simply because of choice. Hard to swallow the idea of someone so intelligent, so self sufficient and capable, sticking with a choice that never pays dividends. At some point she either has to progress along her path or pick a new one, it is the only way for her to progress. It feels like she is getting setup as a late story hail Mary, but as slow as her progress is, it feels less like hyper intelligent character playing the long game, and more just stubbornness.
Raymond Powers
2020-07-26 16:42:46 +0000 UTCI was thinking more for a [drifter] or [wanderer] class.
Jasha Power
2020-07-26 15:46:47 +0000 UTClol sounds like an condition, like Tom's [Lesser Insanity], but yea, I could totally see that for [explorers].
Byron Reynolds
2020-07-26 15:44:39 +0000 UTCIt gives Pirate more agency in the choice. The polls are usually like voting for what you want for dinner and we usually pick "dessert".
WanderingArchitect
2020-07-26 13:26:26 +0000 UTCI don't like it. I'd prefer a story occuring in Chandrar compared to Baleros regardless of genre. I'd prefer a story on the Antinium compared to the Drakes regardless of genre. I think the poll options are just a bit too vague, but I guess that's intentional.
Full Void
2020-07-26 11:52:56 +0000 UTCTravel! We must discover morè things of the innworld!
Toni Pampliega
2020-07-26 11:49:43 +0000 UTCI like it.
Mac
2020-07-26 11:27:11 +0000 UTCWoo building
afruitlesshippo
2020-07-26 10:34:01 +0000 UTCIt's almost like she explicitly rejected the system that is making people more powerful. She is still influencing a lot of events, but both Erin and Ryoka have decided against trying to accumulate personal power.
wiikipedia
2020-07-26 09:48:14 +0000 UTCIt seems the nobility is the least liked in all worlds
flssdd
2020-07-26 09:38:22 +0000 UTClol i think ryoka already has itchy feet
Alexander
2020-07-26 07:42:02 +0000 UTCKinda like dangersense but for when to leave town in a hurry
Jasha Power
2020-07-26 07:01:04 +0000 UTCI voted travel, I want someone to get a skill called [itchy feet] .... that make their feet itchy when spend too long in the one spot.
Jasha Power
2020-07-26 07:00:35 +0000 UTCYeah I can't wait to see what Cirille and the gang do next. Ah wait.
Atlas Dwarf
2020-07-26 06:55:20 +0000 UTCI don't like that we get multiple votes.
The Agent Colson
2020-07-26 06:30:30 +0000 UTCRegardless of what is chosen, it would be nice for some of the storylines to progress. Some things seem to move forward, (wistram, sightless empire, goblins, earthier tech/ inventions, king of destruction. the twins, knelt, titans students, the UN and practically everyone in liscor. All of these had moved forward, all of them progress. Yet, the person who had the foresight to start on antibiotics, guard against earth tech, predict vampiric diseases, manipulate an all powerful necromancer, a dragon, various nobels and the protagonist while identifying threats like the antinium or earther's as a resource and tons more. But after 5 million words can sorta push some wind around. Essentially, one of the smartest characters has become the least capable. Even trey is now more powerful, despite Ryoka's drive to gain the strength needed to save/protect everyone.
Raymond Powers
2020-07-26 06:29:55 +0000 UTCNobility could be good if it went into Lyonette and her family situation more. Kinda don't give a shit about izrils Lord's though. Feel like failure is Laken for some reason.
Compendium
2020-07-26 06:05:05 +0000 UTCExactly.. every single time thats my exact thought process ,ππ
Kris
2020-07-26 06:03:37 +0000 UTCI doubt, both goblin homes were pretty much built last time we saw
Ram nevet
2020-07-26 06:00:44 +0000 UTCHonestly that would make sense
Bean
2020-07-26 05:59:32 +0000 UTCFailure is the best teacher. Chose wisdom over mere learning. Embrace the path of hardship and join us the fail team.
Gabe Canada
2020-07-26 05:57:05 +0000 UTCPlot twist! Itβs all Laken.
Marius K
2020-07-26 05:55:35 +0000 UTCMage class or no
SirThomasXVI
2020-07-26 05:50:09 +0000 UTCRyoka needs to get serious about learning magic.
SirThomasXVI
2020-07-26 05:49:51 +0000 UTCBuilding, I'm hoping for another Rags or Pebblesnatch story.
2020-07-26 05:47:17 +0000 UTCVoted failure. I find it more interesting then success
Reijiato
2020-07-26 05:43:35 +0000 UTCFailure. My favorite stories people fail, a lot, before they get better. Failure chapters always lead to better more fulfilling reversals later.
Halycon404
2020-07-26 05:40:59 +0000 UTCwhen you look at the choices and than think which one has the highest chance of Erin actually being the focus
Nathaniel sheive
2020-07-26 05:39:47 +0000 UTCI vote for failure. Think about it. If failure fails to win arent we all embracing failure?
Gabe Canada
2020-07-26 05:39:31 +0000 UTCWe need Erin to learn how to use her skills! More experimentation more products more money!
BabaNovac
2020-07-26 05:38:21 +0000 UTCI'm excited to see how this goes! I picked Learning, but any of them sound interesting :) Hope your break has been super rewarding, and I'm hyped for the next chapter! <3
Joshua Case
2020-07-26 05:37:48 +0000 UTC