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7.34 C

AHA. But is it what you expect? Yes? No? I'm tired now. Hope you enjoy! (29,800 Words)


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Comments

That has been one of the things about this story that draws me the most. It makes you THINK. Love the quote from Time Enough for Love, btw

Philip Pleiss

The clown is disturbing -- but he does bring up valid points. :(

Beth Rasmussen

The Clown for President! Oh wait...

Koral

Was there ever a time when the majority was right? - Lazarus Long (Robert Heinlein) Seriously though, these C chapters always remind me of Heinlein's writings and the way they forced you to question your perspectives and understanding of the reality around you. In their own way, each chapter Pirate writes seems to force a re-evaluation of perspectives.

Matthew

Honestly, I skim/skip any chapter not Izril

Docnox

I love Tom

yosh drot

I may not like Tom's character the most, but I actually agree with much of his perspective. I can't help but feel that he is the only one seeing the situation for what it really is.

NinjaChicken

I have to admit that the Tom chapters have generally not been my favourite but there was some amazing world-building in this one! Can't wait to see where things go with this arc. Thanks again for all your wonderful work pirateaba!

a.m.

Terrific chapter!!!! Please take time off if you need it real life matters too. Sure is annoying seeing everyone complain about my favorite character. Please ignore these fools who cant appreciate Tom's perspective, I believe it is some of your best work. Keep doing you <3 Much love

Tyler Daniels

This chapter had so many lore and story easter eggs that it deserves a complete breakdown from one of the geniuses that have all the tidbits memorized. Just wow.

Philip Pleiss

When I saw there was a half-elf named Springwater I got super excited thinking there’s a new connection to Ceria here... then I remembered her name is Springwalker not Springwater... you got my hopes up pirate!

Pavante

Rhir readers, you mean rhirders?

Rikk Silirion

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Flowers

I cannot take another chapter of this group it’s depressing and sad wallahi . The only thing I like about this chapter Well when Tom was tell Richard about the demons.

Caanbo

I was hoping it was a trick, like last time.

John Koor

Thank you!

Andrew

She's not a fighter class, so she shouldn't be compared to an adventurer. A better comparison would probably be Magnolia. Although M affects a huge area of land, while E only affects her inn. But with the door and communication spells, she can bridge the gap somewhat.

paksheet

A determined gold rank could kill her in her Inn if it is only her. Outside of her Inn a silver rank Could do so. Lvl 40 in a combat class makes a named adventurer, not lifestyle classes

Ford-Thomas Frank Loveland

Erin’s skill set is more towards “soft power” than straight martial strength, but yes she is a big deal by the world’s standards

Craig

More Richard! And Tom! I REALLY appreciated the "there are no good guys" moment. One of the essences of the story that I feel people miss to romanticize their faves lol

Osiris

She has a skill that delayed a dragon and was impenetrable to a Magus. She is at least at the low end named rank.

Alan McBrayer

That was awesome. More please!

Chargcake

Just when you thought you'd seen the most evil PirateAba could unleash: "But home didn’t have teleporting mosquitos." Wow.. Damn. Yeah, I no longer want to go to Innworld.

John Koor

I mean, her name is certainly starting to travel

Russell Todd

Love or hate, the clown is INTERESTING -- it's class alone stretches the possibilities for this world.

Dwayne Patterson

Best Clown chapter so far! I don't mind it as much as others seem to, but being inside Tom's head is uncomfy even though the deep lore that comes with Clown chapters normally makes up for it. So it was really nice to have all the upsides of a Clown chapter without having to be in Tom's head for 20k+ words. That being said it would have been nice to have at least a few paragraphs from his POV.

Sean Coker

I still like Tom's chapters, even if they are depressing at points. Madness can be fun in small doses, then there's the aftermath.

Parker Groseclose

I liked the clown...before it was turned into the most depressing storyline behind the goblins. Not optimistic about this chapter...

J03MAN

Looks at the title: C Looks at the password: funnyStory *Narrows eyes*

Durzo

Just realized this. Is Erin approaching the power of a named adventure? She above level 40 now. Right?

Tom Prouty

It’s hereeee! Thank you for the chapter!!!

Tom Prouty

Darn it pirateaba. Were you going for 30k words? Thank you for your hard work ♡ rest well

Amaranthy


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