7.31
Added 2020-06-28 06:50:59 +0000 UTCIt's DONE! I'll take it easy next chapter. But see what a break gets you! No--see? Is it good or bad? Hm. (32,800 Words)
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Holy somthing this was amazing
Powernap
2020-07-03 16:47:09 +0000 UTChttps://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/NoodleIncident
Big I
2020-07-02 20:38:35 +0000 UTCIt has hit the website. It generally does that about half an hour before a password gets posted
Alan McBrayer
2020-07-01 03:28:24 +0000 UTCAre we getting something tonight
Caanbo
2020-07-01 03:16:12 +0000 UTCThere isn't a chapter on Erin throwing a coup on Esthelm as it was skipped over. The closest we get is an explanation in 6.52 K but it's kind of downplayed then.
Atlas Dwarf
2020-06-30 18:48:07 +0000 UTCIt happened off—screen right after the Liscor election i think.
B'eliar An'Zoth Lord of Daze
2020-06-30 18:44:07 +0000 UTCCan anyone point me to the chapter where Erin causes a coup in Esthelm? I seem to have missed it and now can’t find it going back. Thanks.
Brendan Fitzpatrick
2020-06-30 12:34:17 +0000 UTCI'm guessing that when the lords decided on confronting Magnolia they thought they would have time to prepare themselves before the meeting. The riot put them on the back foot and Magnolia purposefully kept them there by meeting them in front of the crowd and directly challenging them.
Alan McBrayer
2020-06-29 22:00:24 +0000 UTCI think she's subconsciously realized that the [Magical Innkeeper] class has significantly affected her personality and she doesn't want an advanced warrior class to do the same.
Alan McBrayer
2020-06-29 21:56:38 +0000 UTCI think the inn is closer and the villages further, also I don't think there are any villages north of the city. In general I think a lot of the locations outside the city don't quite match the story, but it's to be expected since they move a bit from book to book anyways and if it was properly to scale we wouldn't see them on the map. Like the dungeon is on the same side as the inn, the bat cave is quite far from the city, etc. Still an excellent map though
Alan McBrayer
2020-06-29 21:53:17 +0000 UTCYeah she's turned down general as well....i would assume she will become the highest level inn keeper in the world....with kick ass skills to go with it.....id love to see her minor repair skill become replicate....so she can mass produce whatever strikes her fancy. Lol.
matt emmons
2020-06-29 18:33:56 +0000 UTCThere is a young dragon on......one of the other walled cities....it isn't allowed to leave the walled city so they invited Erin to come to them.....there's a chapter where she is making airplanes out of the invites thinking its spam mail for a tourist group.
matt emmons
2020-06-29 18:26:46 +0000 UTCI think that might be the original inn.....the current in sits right outside the wall a short distance away....for some reason I thought the city was built up against a hill or small mountain.
matt emmons
2020-06-29 18:25:03 +0000 UTCThe old Lord's arguments to Magnolia felt weird considering he had defensible reasoning. Felt like him saying it's unfair was kinda lazy, where can that argument even go?
Compendium
2020-06-29 16:51:23 +0000 UTCI like this much better than the original ending to 7.30.
Hursha
2020-06-29 16:11:08 +0000 UTCShe doesn't really want her Warrior class, so she doesn't want to waste levels on it.
Hursha
2020-06-29 16:10:47 +0000 UTCGood chapter!
Chargcake
2020-06-29 15:36:56 +0000 UTCIs Erin not leveling her warrior class because the system is always trying to consolidate the class? And Erin always cancels that.
Khress
2020-06-29 13:17:49 +0000 UTCMe to! By the way, isn’t there a dragon from the Walled Cities that wants to visit the inn? My memory may be falling me, but I want to see Teriarch’s reaction to another dragon.
Tom Prouty
2020-06-29 08:06:32 +0000 UTCWow
Tom Prouty
2020-06-29 07:40:49 +0000 UTCThe map is awesome btw.... I didn't think that the WanderingInn was so far away from the city though. You can basically walk the entire diameter of the city instead of walking to the end. Good thing there's the door, otherwise I can't imagine she would have regulars. Even with patrols monsters could get that get drunk regulars between the gate and the Inn. Medieval archers had maximum range from the walls at about 200M (.13 miles). Similarly Bird is firing from his tower.... During the story, we've heard that Halrac and Bird exchanged shots from the wall and the tower. Being .75 miles away seems a bit much, even for a fantasy world.... Maybe not for Halrac, but Bird seems to be a bit of a prodigy even then. In a fantasy world I get it, but still that means the wall are only constantly scanning for monsters let's say .2 miles away (doubling otl range for fantasy reasons) for the regular guardsmen.... With Bird scanning from the tower, let's say .3 -.4 miles away cause he's awesome, that still leaves .2-.3 miles not constantly on guard.... If the Inn was only .5 miles away though, it seems more credible. Sorry, my mind went on a tangent.
Kevin Choi
2020-06-29 04:10:40 +0000 UTCGreat job with the chapter! I'm glad you cut the old version out! This one works way better
Kevin Choi
2020-06-29 03:44:43 +0000 UTCThanks! The rework of the end of the last chapter made for a really good chapter.
Jennifer
2020-06-29 00:23:32 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter Pirateaba!
Deepak Kamlesh
2020-06-28 20:57:40 +0000 UTCI really appreciated the change you made to last chapter and how you re did it this chapter. This felt like a much more authentic treatment of what it means for people to riot.
Craig
2020-06-28 19:58:34 +0000 UTCThat was a great chapter. The change I felt was a more realistic and natural approach to what was happening. I find myself frustrated when I read stories where the protagonist can do no wrong and all their actions work out. I like this story where your main characters are flawed and depicted as human characters not just invincible super heroes.
Matthew
2020-06-28 19:56:12 +0000 UTCGod this chapter set up so many things , I also appreciated the changed last chapter, riots aren't a simple thing . Thanks for writing :)
Matt Creighton
2020-06-28 17:30:38 +0000 UTCShe needs to get substantial concessions from those lords for trade deal, they were part of Tyrion’s army and set off the riots. Best to sic Lynette and Malvolia on them, maybe some Wall Lords as well if she can find any
Jordan
2020-06-28 17:23:12 +0000 UTCLove Grimalkins thought process...lol after this I wonder what he will come up with.
matt emmons
2020-06-28 16:24:46 +0000 UTCThanks, great chapter. But you forgot to add Grimalkin frantically taking notes at the end.
Imran
2020-06-28 16:02:00 +0000 UTCSo many great things in this chapter! Re-read it almost immediately after my first read through, and loved it even more the second time round.
a.m.
2020-06-28 14:21:35 +0000 UTCWow amazing long chapter thanks 🙏 Very satisfying
Caanbo
2020-06-28 12:34:29 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, thanks!
Tom Prouty
2020-06-28 10:51:53 +0000 UTCReally good chapter and improvement over the cut part!
KDP
2020-06-28 09:59:24 +0000 UTCAmazingly well done.👍
Raian
2020-06-28 09:48:09 +0000 UTCNow this is how you write about a riot. The previous attempt was unrealistic. This was beautifully done 👌
Durzo
2020-06-28 09:08:23 +0000 UTCThank you!!
Andrew
2020-06-28 09:01:57 +0000 UTCI was waiting for this like an addict.
naga durga prasad
2020-06-28 07:30:04 +0000 UTCDefinitely good. Thank you for the chap
Josh Bong
2020-06-28 07:18:03 +0000 UTCThanks for the chap.
Joel Nikula
2020-06-28 07:04:07 +0000 UTCMore=more better
Craig
2020-06-28 06:51:57 +0000 UTC
