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5.55 G

Well, it's definitely shorter than last one. But is it better? We'll see! (12,200 Words)


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http://wanderinginn.com/2019/01/29/5-55-g

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True that. :)

You know we're spoiled when 12.2k words is short

Newguy Roy

TypoRight after Reiss fires his Deathbolt. Point black range. Short chapter....but some nice movement to it. I quite enjoy Pyrite's thoughts on his skills. Everyone can't be a knight or Queen in this story... I hope Pyrite's skills come in handy in the Mountains....if they end up going there. Gnight, and enjoy the snow!

Problem is, remaining a wandering horde, peaceful or not, does not break the cycle.

Sphinxes

Another excellent chapter.

Avenwing

That's one way to axe a question.

Gabe Canada

Thank you!

Andrew

Seems like mining is a valuable skill. Is this

honestly after such long chapters i think this short chapter was a nice breath of fresh air. sometimes these shorter chapters are just better for both the author and the reader

I think that is unlikely due to the fact that rags is the leader of the goblins and she is a known quantity that has caused problems in the past. In addition to that the antinium are able to provide a valuable and useful resource in the form of defending liscore and providing basic assistance in construction they provide a valuable service while the goblins need to find something like that but as of this moment they do not have that ability. The best they might be able to hope for is that after defending Liscore the drakes don't attempt to kill them.

NinjaChicken

Or it might wnd in an new dral like the antium deal.

Håvard

A lot happened here, and we got to see a bit more of the emotional side of some of the goblins, Reiss betrayal was inevitable and I knew Rags wouldn't fight Liscor for the simple reason of Erin. I figure she would play some sort of role in Liscor's defense and also I think Rags can no longer stay in the area around Liscor. I think we will see a long term parting of Erin and Rags and this is where they will say goodbye. The chapter was good, follow your instincts, be careful of burnout, and PLEASE keep writing. I look forward to your chapters every week.😁

NinjaChicken

Saying this one is shorter than the last one is like saying a lake is smaller than the ocean. While true, you can still drown in a lake. Can’t wait for more.

Parker Groseclose


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