5.54 (Rewrite)
Added 2019-01-22 13:26:29 +0000 UTCNormally I'd break this one up, but...this is the chapter I meant to write. And lemme tell you--my hands hurt. Read it and weep. Or stop for a break because it's long. (27,000 Words)
betterChapter
http://wanderinginn.com/2019/01/22/5-54-2
Comments
There's an entire city in the underground dungeon.... the goblins want a home.... maybe the red-fang goblins and cave goblins can convince the goblin lord to take that city for them? Maybe Toren takes out the remaining dungeon boss thing, and takes out the necromancer when the necromancer tries to get to his apprentice.
Joseph R Gratton
2019-01-26 01:07:07 +0000 UTCVery good chapter!! I'm really glad you rewrote it.
2019-01-25 22:44:49 +0000 UTCWell, I ended up making a patreon because I couldn't wait until saturday, and I feared I'd be tempted to read the non canon version first. I was well worth the money. Thank you for the ride, in the last 6 monthes I've followed Erin and the world around her, I haven't been disapointed, it's been amazing. Thank you.
Benjamin Farcot
2019-01-23 14:09:29 +0000 UTCChapter is a lot better! Well done.
Kevin Choi
2019-01-23 06:44:38 +0000 UTCOh my god. Only up to the crying party so far and my socks are already blown off. All those plot points are cleaned up, dressed up, and tied up with a bow for us to look at and go "oh wait is it this one or this or is that a red herring or whose plan is right??" Edit: 7/10 my ass, easily 9/10. Tons of setup and a healthy (and delicious) dose of payoff while you were at it. Beautiful chapter.
Arctruth
2019-01-23 06:21:51 +0000 UTCHmmm time for Ryoka to make an amazing well timed return with a certain wealthy lizard?
Ashrothe
2019-01-23 05:36:06 +0000 UTCWhat an amazing chapter, thank you!!
Andrew
2019-01-23 00:08:48 +0000 UTCok now have finished the chapter. that was unexpected, interesting, and very eventful. i cant wait to see what the non patreons think about this
2019-01-22 21:11:00 +0000 UTCi havent even read it yet but that is an incredible amount of words. maybe pirate should consider putting hands in ice bucket?
2019-01-22 20:33:39 +0000 UTCbetterChapter is the password. Copy and paste!
pirateaba
2019-01-22 17:46:14 +0000 UTCHelp in a newb . Received link but no password? What am I missing?
2019-01-22 17:44:24 +0000 UTCI'd be forced to upgrade my Patreon contribution.
Randomdigits
2019-01-22 17:10:50 +0000 UTC50k words chapter by 2020?
Ground Control
2019-01-22 14:15:09 +0000 UTCtriple long dang
derp
2019-01-22 13:45:34 +0000 UTCDead Gods that is a lot of words
B'eliar An'Zoth Lord of Daze
2019-01-22 13:28:14 +0000 UTC
