Two Doms - Ch. 26 (21.5k words)
Added 2025-01-27 01:49:07 +0000 UTCAUTHOR'S NOTE:
Hi angels! Sor
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my favorite chapter so far!! (i dont know what recency bias is, dont tell me) i Loved the way you wrote the drinking game. the pacing was so frenetic! you built this little back and forth of interjection from the game vs. focus on nick that creates this mounting high-wire tension. and it all drops through the floor when she finally throws up in the toilet. also the hate sex… peak
June
2025-03-05 00:51:35 +0000 UTCawww that was really cute
Xeroa Bonnevie
2025-02-27 17:35:14 +0000 UTCTook me a bit to get to reading this but this is probably my favorite chapter so far. Nikki(?) and Nick play off each other so well and that's especially so in this chapter—like, holy fuck the tension and the hate sex and the flirting??? That's the good shit. Also seeing her running on all the gender euphoria in this party is just very fun and entertaining.
July
2025-02-02 06:39:34 +0000 UTCyou're welcome shnookums
goose
2025-02-01 03:14:21 +0000 UTCMEEMAW?? I AM TWENTY NINE
goose
2025-02-01 03:14:01 +0000 UTCThanks for the meal meemaw 😋 - Always love a house party arc and I am gagged at how well you write them, the situations messy and so introspective, I’m living for it ❤️
BIBI
2025-02-01 02:53:32 +0000 UTCThis is really good ^_^ the game was really funny. The misunderstanding where Little Dom (Nikki?) thought Big Dom (just Dom?) had told Karl about the blowjobs and accidentally told Karl was interesting. It's also really clear they care about each other and I hope they figure things out!!! No rush though (: I like the dripfeed of them slowly but surely becoming friends EDIT: Big Dom and Little Dom, I mean, not Little Dom and Karl
GG
2025-01-28 17:24:46 +0000 UTCthe hate sex had me in shambles 😂
GwiYeoMi
2025-01-28 00:29:15 +0000 UTCLOVE this chapter!! It’s always the best whenever the two of them get to hate someone together. Also the sex scene might be my favorite in TD yet!! Can’t wait to see more 💜 :D
Stephanie
2025-01-27 03:57:56 +0000 UTC