Transfigure .9080085
Added 2019-10-05 02:40:38 +0000 UTCHello everyone!!
Wow, it has been a long few days but I finally finished the next update. I am trying not to make the late releases a habit. I expect production to pick up over the next month or so. I have a large portion of the next update already well advanced because I’ve written a lot of stuff in parallel that’s finally near the point for an editing pass. So if you see something missing, don’t worry, it is probably coming soon.
Anyway, onwards to the release!
Transfigure .9080085 - 12,600 words
Taylor is convinced to take a potentially lucrative deal at the brothel while awkwardly fending off his father’s advances. A bimbofied Taylor endures servitude in the clutches of T Corp’s Lucas Ferret.
-continued Bimbo Tay experience on Lucas’ route. (4600 words)
-quickjump added for bimbo content
-edited the Proprietor’s introduction
-added brothel intro mark II on Rhea’s path (Teddy Roux variation) (Thanks to Director G for sponsoring this route!) (8000 words)
-added a Patreon logo and Tango Fiction logo to the title page.
-more Xs added to show blank paths in development
-various minor edits and typo fixes, several pic fixes (Teddy etc).
Upgrade pack, google drive:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1mimfIJv5S4pvqg22xv4BlgtSYZIcenOy
More links being uploaded...
Full v:
https://mega.nz/#!k2ICSCZI!bzNjDXu8kNiIxBX9WJvf6lnnZ6xbnwmLPGGJq5pdkL0
https://drive.google.com/open?id=17zN-ezgctXB72Ex-ACFeCBkDcoJAO4pQ
Let me know if you liked where the brothel content is heading or if you thought the dialogue this time around was humorous. I have been trying to work on the humor a bit, it seems kind of hit and miss. A familiar bully also makes a surprise appearance so see if you can find that :P
As always, thank you very much for your generous support!!!
<3 Tango
Comments
Oh, I also intend to update the walk-through but that might be next month's side project.
Tango
2019-10-09 06:49:23 +0000 UTCGood question. He is a superficial character... maybe he will be involved in some corporate intrigue later on.
Tango
2019-10-09 06:39:39 +0000 UTCThe bimbo is Rikki Six. I am working on some trackers that may help keep organized. A problem I noticed is that the saves use the heading for the passage which may or may not be helpful. I am going to see if I can modify this for better names... might be a wishlist thing though. Thanks for the feedback!
Tango
2019-10-09 06:38:46 +0000 UTCThere's actually so much story and so many branches I have trouble finding old stories when I want to find them again lol. Even with some of the quick jump features. By the way, who was the actress you chose for the PC Bimbo? Great choice
Miro
2019-10-09 05:26:15 +0000 UTCOk, got it. I think that Harriat needs to have his personality better emphasized, because right now he feels like diet Lucas. What makes him different, aside from a preference for blondes?
Sentimental Penguin
2019-10-08 03:17:09 +0000 UTCThanks, SP! The current brothel path is a bit "rail roady" because the director wanted Teddy content, not the other brothel content. The alt choices that are xed off will influence the customers Taylor gets and which of the brothel endings will be possible. I am glad you thought it was humorous. I have been trying to "be more funny." I am angling the bimbo content slightly away from Lucas. It is well known he prefers brunettes and there is and will be plenty of content with him both bimbo and "regular" Taylor. The main reason I created Harriat instead of just continuing with Lucas is because of the media and I am differentiating this path from others where Taylor is Lucas' amusement/interest, not merely the punishment and more group oriented bimbo work. I have a lot of office stuff, including secretary etc. Thanks for posting!!
Tango
2019-10-07 20:41:22 +0000 UTCOk, having played the new stuff now, I actually liked the brothel stuff more than the Ferret stuff. I expected it to be the other way around. Here's my Pros and Cons of each new section: Brothel Pros: - Actually really funny - Gets to tell us more both about Taylor, Teddy, and their family - It's hilariously awkward Cons: - It feels like it cuts off at an awkward spot. I want more! - The current path feels like it doesn't give you enough options once you get into the brothel. Why do you only have one customer? Ferret's Bimbo Route Pro: - I'm a fan of office sexytimes scenarios - Lucas is IMHO one of the sexiest characters here, a dominating older male who knows what he wants and is two steps ahead of the protagonist. Con: - Why do we immediately switch over to a nameless executive? I wish we either spent more time with Lucas, or this executive gets a name and a personality other than "Executive who's a dick" - No sex while doing office stuff! That's one of my fave scenarios, getting naughty while answering the phone, typing on the computer, etc. Wish we could find scenes that illustrate that.
Sentimental Penguin
2019-10-07 17:12:32 +0000 UTCI am glad you liked it! As for the surprise... I often include little teasers in the Xed routes. It is on the brothel line. Thanks for the comment, Miro!
Tango
2019-10-06 03:51:25 +0000 UTCI need to know where this surprise appearance is lol. Also bimbo content was 10/10
Miro
2019-10-06 00:33:25 +0000 UTC
