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Pioneer of the Abyss - Chapter 39

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Don't mind this. It's so that free readers can't see half the chapter when the chapter eventually becomes patron only.

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For those of you who are reading this on a website that is not Patreon, please stop. You're reading a pirated version. Instead, if you would be so kind, please click on the table of contents link below and go to my Patreon instead. Or even read it off of Royal Road, which is free.

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And this marks the end of the first half or so of book one.

Of course, I'm starting the next half right away. Maybe even tonight. But maybe tomorrow instead.

It depends on how I feel after finishing posting this, and if I want to go ahead and finish preparation for the Royal Road launch of this story tonight or not.

If I do then I won't write another chapter tonight. If I don't then it'll still depend on how I feel.

Still, six chapters today of Pioneer of the Abyss is pretty good if I do say so myself.

Click the following link for the 1448 word chapter 39:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DbxE6oFH_-Qt-SLR7MrP0ujUjog8moVSNbpMcRabHRw/edit?usp=sharing

Comments

This is Definitely a page scroller good job Wolfie

Ravn1

Anyone else wondering if Kraken is Daddy or Mommy? after all… WolfShine has a certain theme in basically all his “orphan” protagonist books.

Michelle Goodman

Gotta say, I really like this one. Aqua just being a bit shy instead of doing her best to ignore everyone else is a nice change from your usual MC. I love the interaction between her and the chat.

Jacobr365

Getting subnautica vibes lol

Aeonstorm

I don’t expect that to happen till she is at least lv50 but most likely lv100 as who knows what exist in the abyss

ChaosOmega98

I’m wondering if the orcayne might have been protecting her from the shadows and her being selected through them into some disarray

ChaosOmega98

I wonder when Aqua will go to the abyss and how it will come about?

Aeonstorm

I’m being to wonder how these cities were built if the people don’t seem like they can naturally breath underwater like aqua

ChaosOmega98

Very cool, you'd think there would be a potion to regrow the arm as well since magic is a thing, but maybe it's far outside what a sponsor can afford. Glad everyone likes this including me. Imagine writing this and nobody was liking it? Crimson got some crap because Aria could never die, but I don't think you've had to deal with anyone not liking a new story. Now Acqua needs to find a place with hundreds of creatures of her same level so she can get regen far higher. By the end of the story, she'll be practically invulnerable.

Tyler Machado

Yeah things with the Orcayne family seem like they could go either way but seem to be going in a positive direction.

Aeonstorm

Thx for the chapter. Ominous tidings with the family as well as the second ranked on her planet. Can’t wait to read more about it.

Quendolayne

#MINERAQUA #MINTS4LIFE

Snake With An Aurora Borealis

Everybody: Let's get you a prosthesis Aqua: don't worry it's just a flesh wound

shootingQuasar1

I’m looking forward to reactions when they see her arm regenerating. I’m also curious about the orcayne family and Aqua’s history still been suspicious?

Aeonstorm


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