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Pioneer of the Abyss - Chapter 17

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Don't mind this. It's so that free readers can't see half the chapter when the chapter eventually becomes patron only.

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For those of you who are reading this on a website that is not Patreon, please stop. You're reading a pirated version. Instead, if you would be so kind, please click on the table of contents link below and go to my Patreon instead. Or even read it off of Royal Road, which is free.

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Table of Contents

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Starting now I'm posting the chapters one at a time instead of in sets since they'll eventually need to be locked by patron tier once the story goes to Royal Road. And it's difficult to sort the chapters by patron tier when multiple chapters are in one post.

Click the following link for the 1547 word chapter 17:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Tv32Nf9tTPnNqoArxqxXE5a-Dr2b5glgfxfxtLGxzds/edit?usp=sharing

First 9.5k words - Chapters 1-5

Chapters 6-8 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127544659

Chapters 9-12 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127593734

Chapters 13-16 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127626076

Chapter 17 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127677922

Chapter 18 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127682217

Chapter 19 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127692885

Chapter 20 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127696837

Comments

The latest chapters are on the Patreon post unformatted, but only the new ones. If you want to blame someone, blame Patreon for not having formatting options.

WolfShine

Tf is this, I want to read the chapter on patreon and not some google doc, for this I paid

Crowny 66

Read chapter 21 when I finish and post it. That chapter directly addresses your question.

WolfShine

Actually, i have to ask how rare is it for someone to appear with two bloodlines? Because for some reason nobody has considered that she may have two bloodlines

reventcake295

Really loving this character and her powers and bloodline, really interested to see where you take it

jj_4567

Thank you for the chapter

jj_4567

Thanks for the chapter

bladepony games

I’m curious if her water skill allows her to use moisture in the air? If she could gather it and fire small bullets or needles of water?

Aeonstorm

I’m curious and looking forward to how that reveal is going to go since her two bloodlines seem to suggest a link to two families which seem to have high status. Though not of info about how the empire is structured has been revealed so I’m not sure if the bloodline families are nobility or some such.

Aeonstorm

I hope it’s something distinctly Abyssal Orca just to really mess with everyone, especially the bloodline research center.

Aura

Thanks for the chapter! I’m excited to see what’s next for Aqua, particularly in how this dungeon is going to go and in what her next Skill will be! 🔱

Captain2003Rex

“So what bloodline do you have, Aqua?” “Abyssal Kraken.” “HA AH, I’ve won the bet! It 𝘸𝘢𝘴 Kraken, not Orca!” “Oh, well I mean, the other person wasn’t wrong.” “Eh? Come again?” “When I first awoke my bloodline, the System told me that I actually had two: Abyssal Orca 𝘢𝘯𝘥 Kraken. Then it merged the two of them into Abyssal Kraken.” “…damnit, I didn’t account for the possibility of us 𝘣𝘰𝘵𝘩 being right when I made that bet…”

Captain2003Rex

I’m absolutely enamored by this story! I’m so glad you enjoy writing it so much ^.^

Aura

Oh that bet is hilarious! 🤣🤣

reventcake295

thanks for the chapter!

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