Pioneer of the Abyss - Chapter 17
Added 2025-04-28 20:52:45 +0000 UTC----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Don't mind this. It's so that free readers can't see half the chapter when the chapter eventually becomes patron only.
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For those of you who are reading this on a website that is not Patreon, please stop. You're reading a pirated version. Instead, if you would be so kind, please click on the table of contents link below and go to my Patreon instead. Or even read it off of Royal Road, which is free.
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Starting now I'm posting the chapters one at a time instead of in sets since they'll eventually need to be locked by patron tier once the story goes to Royal Road. And it's difficult to sort the chapters by patron tier when multiple chapters are in one post.
Click the following link for the 1547 word chapter 17:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Tv32Nf9tTPnNqoArxqxXE5a-Dr2b5glgfxfxtLGxzds/edit?usp=sharing
First 9.5k words - Chapters 1-5
Chapters 6-8 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127544659
Chapters 9-12 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127593734
Chapters 13-16 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127626076
Chapter 17 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127677922
Chapter 18 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127682217
Chapter 19 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127692885
Chapter 20 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127696837
Comments
The latest chapters are on the Patreon post unformatted, but only the new ones. If you want to blame someone, blame Patreon for not having formatting options.
WolfShine
2025-05-05 22:19:47 +0000 UTCTf is this, I want to read the chapter on patreon and not some google doc, for this I paid
Crowny 66
2025-05-05 22:10:34 +0000 UTCRead chapter 21 when I finish and post it. That chapter directly addresses your question.
WolfShine
2025-04-29 04:42:08 +0000 UTCActually, i have to ask how rare is it for someone to appear with two bloodlines? Because for some reason nobody has considered that she may have two bloodlines
reventcake295
2025-04-29 04:41:16 +0000 UTCReally loving this character and her powers and bloodline, really interested to see where you take it
jj_4567
2025-04-29 00:14:59 +0000 UTCThank you for the chapter
jj_4567
2025-04-29 00:13:11 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
bladepony games
2025-04-28 22:00:12 +0000 UTCI’m curious if her water skill allows her to use moisture in the air? If she could gather it and fire small bullets or needles of water?
Aeonstorm
2025-04-28 21:58:45 +0000 UTCI’m curious and looking forward to how that reveal is going to go since her two bloodlines seem to suggest a link to two families which seem to have high status. Though not of info about how the empire is structured has been revealed so I’m not sure if the bloodline families are nobility or some such.
Aeonstorm
2025-04-28 21:43:31 +0000 UTCI hope it’s something distinctly Abyssal Orca just to really mess with everyone, especially the bloodline research center.
Aura
2025-04-28 21:36:52 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! I’m excited to see what’s next for Aqua, particularly in how this dungeon is going to go and in what her next Skill will be! 🔱
Captain2003Rex
2025-04-28 21:25:19 +0000 UTC“So what bloodline do you have, Aqua?” “Abyssal Kraken.” “HA AH, I’ve won the bet! It 𝘸𝘢𝘴 Kraken, not Orca!” “Oh, well I mean, the other person wasn’t wrong.” “Eh? Come again?” “When I first awoke my bloodline, the System told me that I actually had two: Abyssal Orca 𝘢𝘯𝘥 Kraken. Then it merged the two of them into Abyssal Kraken.” “…damnit, I didn’t account for the possibility of us 𝘣𝘰𝘵𝘩 being right when I made that bet…”
Captain2003Rex
2025-04-28 21:23:19 +0000 UTCI’m absolutely enamored by this story! I’m so glad you enjoy writing it so much ^.^
Aura
2025-04-28 21:21:39 +0000 UTCOh that bet is hilarious! 🤣🤣
reventcake295
2025-04-28 21:00:54 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter!
BecauseIAmAW2eb
2025-04-28 20:57:41 +0000 UTC