Pioneer of the Abyss - Covers, Story Art, Synopsis, and the first 9.5k words
Added 2025-04-26 02:15:56 +0000 UTCCurrent Synopsis:
Life and death. Power and Growth. The viewers of the Pioneers don’t care about the end result of any of that.
All they care about is their own entertainment as they watch the Pioneers take the first step into newly initialized worlds on System-based livestreams.
On a dark day hated by all citizens of the lower worlds, Aqua finds herself chosen during the Selection Ceremony as one of the next users of their world to participate in the World Expansion. Where she is sent to a newly discovered world just recently initialized into the System to showcase the world on a livestream shown to the entire Alliance.
But things take a turn almost immediately as she finds herself awakening not just one but two Bloodlines.
And once they merge, the Abyssal Kraken takes her first dive into the waters of her new world.
Join Aqua as she navigates the world of Oceana while dealing with the broadcast constantly following her along the way.
Two potential covers:
Art:
I'm rather excited by this new story. You can tell by the fact that I wrote almost all of this just today alone.
Anyways, this post has the first five chapters, which includes the first 9550 words. And I'm probably gonna release it on RR sometime around right after the recent writathon ends on Royal Road.
So click on the following link to check it out:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1a3LmEUEE7WB5oaIXN7xP5fjrURb6mu2fqxtVnt38C4Y/edit?usp=sharing
First 9.5k words - Chapters 1-5
Chapters 6-8 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127544659
Chapters 9-12 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127593734
Chapters 13-16 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127626076
Chapter 17 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127677922
Chapter 18 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127682217
Chapter 19 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127692885
Chapter 20 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127696837
Chapter 21 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127704976
The rest are in the Collection or my Table of Contents post.
Comments
I'll be posting it to Royal Road at some point soon. But right now is a poor time since it's close to the end of the Writathon. So Royal Road is currently being flooded by new stories. And on top of that, Royal Road changed the way their Rising Stars list works so it's a lot harder for already established authors on Royal Road starting new stories there. I want to post it to Royal Road soon though.
WolfShine
2025-04-30 04:31:42 +0000 UTCWolfshine boss will you also post this great novel at Royal Road?... Please post it at Royal Road🥺🥺🥺 Because i just started reading it and its already amazing and i want more please tell us you'll post it at Royal Road🥺🥺🥺
Null
2025-04-30 04:28:06 +0000 UTCalso, the system screen is bright as fuck in google docs, is there a way to make google docs dark theme?
Aschente
2025-04-29 19:44:11 +0000 UTCYooo a new story, fuck yea!!!
Aschente
2025-04-29 19:28:27 +0000 UTCVery intriguing so far! This may be my favourite series start of yours so far!
Dillsimmons
2025-04-29 15:21:24 +0000 UTCFor what little it's worth I like the second cover besf.
Ben Bailey
2025-04-28 16:02:36 +0000 UTCLOVING THIS!!!
jj_4567
2025-04-28 12:30:25 +0000 UTCi think i might like this story more than Wolf of the blood moon. Its awesome!
BecauseIAmAW2eb
2025-04-27 21:43:55 +0000 UTCHaven’t read yet, probably won’t for a bit until like chap 20 or so is out. But will.
Briar Rosier
2025-04-27 01:28:31 +0000 UTCYou have me hooked! Cant wait to read more 🔱
Leve
2025-04-26 22:24:01 +0000 UTCI enjoyed this very much, sad it will probably be a while before it gets consistent posts
Zuuuuuri
2025-04-26 15:48:48 +0000 UTCMan this is gonna be great
Van
2025-04-26 14:17:19 +0000 UTCVery interesting!
Aeonstorm
2025-04-26 10:11:40 +0000 UTCI look forward to more!
Snake With An Aurora Borealis
2025-04-26 09:15:35 +0000 UTCAlways when there is some evil overlord or whatever in a story I just imagine Josh from Lets game it out playing Planet Coaster and laughing his ass off as he sends people flying everywhere or as he plays any city management game
AreVee
2025-04-26 08:29:53 +0000 UTCI lo e it already can't wait to see more I love deep sea and that and this is a unique take to the system user fighting underwater since there aren't many at all that do it so I love it
Myles Beyl
2025-04-26 08:23:38 +0000 UTCThis looks awesome. I look forward to more from this story
RedWolf17
2025-04-26 05:42:03 +0000 UTCI like her lazy expression! this is a very cool idea I hope you write much of it.
Dantalia
2025-04-26 04:55:20 +0000 UTCJust finished reading, this looks really good! Can’t wait to see more! 🔱
Captain2003Rex
2025-04-26 03:49:58 +0000 UTCCan't wait for more thanks for the chapter
bladepony games
2025-04-26 03:39:45 +0000 UTCThis looks like it's gonna be another good one
Childish Jordino
2025-04-26 03:19:55 +0000 UTCYou never miss with any of your stories! Thank you for always keeping me sane at work...
Jake Rands
2025-04-26 03:16:57 +0000 UTCBro, I need you to write this. It's totally badass!
Chris Hodge
2025-04-26 02:55:10 +0000 UTCCan't wait for more
Kyle Kalka
2025-04-26 02:49:03 +0000 UTCYOOOO this looks RAD! Now to actually read it lol 🔱
Captain2003Rex
2025-04-26 02:19:40 +0000 UTC
