Crimson Eternal - Ninth set of chapters - 14835 Words, chapters 51 through the Epilogue of Book 1, and Story Art
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Don't mind this fluff. It's so that free readers can't click on the link.
Alrighty! Book one of Crimson Eternal is noooooow complete! I will be starting book 2 next.
Also, I will be doing book 2 differently from book 1. I will no longer be posting it in sets.
From now on I'll be posting it chapter by chapter again.
That said, remember that the chapters are longer for this story than my other stories.
At this point, I'm spending most of my time writing lol. Whether it's this story or my others.
Honestly, starting a new story always leaves me refreshed. It's rather nice.
The story will stay Patreon only for probably a few or so more days. Once I finish writing somewhere between 70-80 chapters total. And I'm currently at about 60 ish chapters written.
The ninth set of chapters is here! I hope you enjoy! It's also the longest set of the bunch!
There is one piece of character art for a different character that isn't Aria.
Also, one more cover:
Crimson Eternal Sets of chapters:
Book 2 chapters will no longer be linked at the bottom here. Go to the table of contents below to find them. Or just search the feed.
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For those of you who are reading this on a website that is not Patreon, please stop. You're reading a pirated version. Instead, if you would be so kind, please click on the table of contents link below and go to my Patreon instead. Or even read it off of Royal Road, which is free.
Comments
This was a beautiful conclusion to book 1! I can't help but to REALLY hope Aria gets to meet the team again some day. And I hope she gets to make a few new friends as well.
Memhotep
2025-01-28 16:36:11 +0000 UTCI would like to see more of the interactions between main character and the others, since she is immortal I feel a large portion of the story should be the reationships she makes, as they are only tempory and fleeting to her. So, It would take more for her to become attached and when she does its only really a weakness to her witch makes the relationships she makes all the more specal when people manage to get close to her. It would be nice to see more of the lead up to that as it feels largly glossed over to me.
Andrew Pilavachi
2024-01-12 12:33:59 +0000 UTCNote in the epilogue, it should be: "The Dungeon Cell right AFTER Aria's Disappearance". Enjoyed the story!
lenkite
2024-01-12 04:53:05 +0000 UTCThe Emperor's death completed the contract.
WolfShine
2023-12-30 03:50:14 +0000 UTCDid the general technically break the contract? It stated Aria had 3 hours to do what she wanted with the idiot emperor, that would include with his corpse right, so wouldn't interrupting immediately after hearing she was drath have been a violation of the 3 hours, and break the contract?
Scott McCarthy
2023-12-30 03:48:23 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters! I really love this story. Love the ending and conclusion of book 1. Cant wait for the next chapter and thank you very much for your hard work writing all these wonderfull stories!
Patrizia
2023-12-30 03:32:01 +0000 UTCI really love this story it's my new favorite
Wintermelody
2023-12-30 03:09:34 +0000 UTCIt's nice to know that they really were her friends.
Sam
2023-12-30 03:04:13 +0000 UTCWell, hope she gets some time to experiment with her class and what the system considers a 'being' for leveling purposes, like monsters in dungeons if they exists would be a better target than the poor fauna (like she hunted in her last break) Also get the limits of her death summons, like how much can she gets, what they consume, what level the souls she keeps need to be for sustaining the summons etc.
Lijwent
2023-12-30 02:57:28 +0000 UTCAbsolutely loved how you ended the first book, this here was the reason i voted this one my favourite even though it’s the newest.
Dillsimmons
2023-12-30 02:45:44 +0000 UTCIve gotta say. Loved this whole thing so much. When it finished i was cackling. Go our Beloved Lady Death, go and explore the Universe and the many World's and Mysteries it has to offer.
Dajer
2023-12-30 02:28:30 +0000 UTCI think she should have added to the letter that it doesn’t have to be sentient beings. But that’s just my opinion and thought. Also, if she manages to get ahold of a very high level soul, she could probably steamroll up her levels. Just summon spirits to hunt creatures or enemies to level her up while she sits in a hammock or chair and sips wine. Maybe she buys a fishing boat and “employs” death spirits.
Briar Rosier
2023-12-30 01:50:06 +0000 UTCI will say I love how you wrote this story so far I love the longer chapters over the other books tbh lol and great book 1 can't wait to see where this story goes
Myles Beyl
2023-12-30 01:41:53 +0000 UTC
