Marshal Henderson 01 - 017
Added 2025-03-16 20:45:49 +0000 UTCAnd here's page 17 with a .zip file with the clean panels including an unused one.
Sometimes showing how characters move coming close to each other just drags the action down and you must cut that movement. If you do it right the action flows and remains visually understandable.
Comments
Ok, excellent hand placement. 10/10 no notes.
Soul Noir
2025-03-17 23:33:18 +0000 UTCI needed a shorter speech, I should have looked up the exact original phrase as "emotional shock" sounds way better.
Briaeros
2025-03-17 09:21:05 +0000 UTCOh this is how I imagined the scene in Robocop if Robocop were a woman where he says Madame you have suffered an emotional shock. I will notify a rape crisis center.
claybear
2025-03-17 04:44:36 +0000 UTCOooo, I love the unwanted bare breasted nervous hug
Jen
2025-03-16 21:08:22 +0000 UTC
