After some comments, I looked at the first pages and realized the dialogue didn't make everything as clear as it should. And knowing you would *never* forgive me a confusing plot I've rewritten part of the dialogue. Now it implies more clearly that Lara and Dakota know each other by fame only.
(no, I don't have plans for digitally inserting Hayden Christensen in any scene)
Briaeros
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