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Akelun 0.5 - pg 12

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Akelun 0.5 - pg 12

Comments

Well, thank's for the constructive criticism, Dragonniar. ^^ Though, I don't understand what you find is wrong there... I don't have the feeling I made a mistake where you said I did. Are you talking about the panel where the leg is sliding on the ground (with the *ZWIP* word)?

Akelun

The foot in the close up looks like in wrong angle compare to the leg, or maybe more the leg looks to be more pointed upward then towards the reader like the foot. Could be the scales that mess up this 3D effect here. Nice motion in the second to last panel though ^^

Dragonniar


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