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The Phantom

This is the other project I've just started working on. It's an MG version of Phantom of the Opera. Instead of being set in the Opera, it will be set in the world of bodybuilding. The image above is a character test. I'm testing out different character designs to see if I like them. They are from left to right, Carl, Christian and Raul. Their friend in the background should be self explanatory.

Let me know what you think. As I said, this is in the very early stages and I plan to take my time with it to get it just right. I wouldn't expect to see this completed before Halloween. But don't worry I'm not going to be working on it exclusively. There will be lots of other projects in between!

And as always, any feedback would be appreciated.

The Phantom

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It's set in a legendary gym, not unlike the Santa Monica Gold's. It involves Christian, a surfer dude who was bit by the bodybuilding bug during a summer fling with Raul (pictured above). Of course, the gym is reputed to be haunted. And as a pretty boy newbie, Christian catches the Phantom's eye, and he decided to train him, using special techniques and substances that he has developed. Of course there are a few more layers to the story than this. There is a revenge plot by the Phantom and the return of Raul, and one or two more complications on top of that.

That may be a good thing. You're not supposed to like Carl. He's an obnoxious, arrogant, primadonna, teen bodybuilding champ, who has won every contest he has ever entered. Only his fans like him. Anyone who knows him, doesn't.

I'm intrigued by what a muscle growth version of Phantom of the Opera entails.

Jeff Conser

Don't like Carl's look at all; terrible hair and too bulky. Christian and Raul both look good.


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