Alright, I gotta be that guy.
Overall, excellent work; however, were it not for the superb Tulio, I wouldn't be sure that, that was supposed to be Chel(face all wrong).
Juandray Morris
2022-07-27 10:22:29 +0000 UTC
Lo gracioso es que es probable que sea canon jaja
F Roberto Rodriguez
2022-07-27 04:20:17 +0000 UTC
It's implied based on where her head popped up from during the kissing scene
Seawolf
2022-07-27 01:14:02 +0000 UTC
Definitely takes "oh come all ye faithful" to a new level. lol
Hey Chel did say she wanted to serve the gods, this means letting the "gods" finish inside her. ;-)
Dennis Hanes
2022-07-27 01:07:12 +0000 UTC
kidding; sorry.
Anthony Docimo
2022-07-26 20:51:05 +0000 UTC
which director's cut did you see? :)
Anthony Docimo
2022-07-26 20:50:53 +0000 UTC
good point; thank you.
Anthony Docimo
2022-07-26 20:50:28 +0000 UTC
Agreed
Jose rodriguez
2022-07-26 17:57:36 +0000 UTC
Reminded of a Fate/Stay Night fic where Shirou was banging Caren. (Silver-haired nun who happens to be a Sadist)
And when they needed to explain why they were late for a meeting, Caren made it sound like she was giving a religious sermon. XD
SSCat
2022-07-26 17:26:39 +0000 UTC
I think “Hear that?” is most correct in this case - he’s not just getting the other person’s attention, he’s specifically drawing attention to a sound.
Nicholas Grey
2022-07-26 16:45:05 +0000 UTC
Pretty sure that's canon 😉
NEOIVAN100
2022-07-26 16:15:41 +0000 UTC
though English weirdness strikes again: if you want to modify the text any, the first line might be "see?" or "hear that?"...or "proof"
or borrow a page from _Beowulf_, where the first line is "Hwaet" which means nothing, but gets the listener's attention......so maybe "!!" in your great illustration?
Anthony Docimo
2022-07-26 15:44:06 +0000 UTC
Quite the convincing argument, honestly. great work!
Anthony Docimo
2022-07-26 15:41:09 +0000 UTC
Damn, I remember the blowjob scene, but not that one 😝👍