Donut Delinquent Chapter 9 Page 24
Added 2024-06-08 07:18:09 +0000 UTCI like tinkering with my style, as it helps me make sure I'm always putting my 100% into something and not just going through the motions every page.
Especially enamored with the way I drew Masako in panel 1. She's a character I've always struggled to look the way I really want her to, and I think I got it there. Enjoy!
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Comments
Unless they're named Lisbeth.
Scryer
2024-06-09 07:04:48 +0000 UTCHonestly, you're getting much better. First time you drew noses didn't quite work out, but this time it actually really does. (Sincerely) Congratulations for getting Masako to where you're happy with how she looks, not sure if it's what you mean but the tomboyish outfit really does work for her, even if it's a mystery how she fits into those pants. One criticism I have of this page though is being confused what's going on with Leo's arm in that last pannel. Wonder what Masako's talking about though, unless it was stated beforehand and I just forgot. Also, can imagine her taking a liking to Krissy, even if she learns what transpired shortly before her arrival.
Scryer
2024-06-09 07:03:48 +0000 UTCNot into pregnancy but Masako is drawn really well! I especially love the cellulite. That being said pretty irresponsible for a pregnant woman to be walking around in the rain dressed like that.
Vameese
2024-06-08 23:25:07 +0000 UTCFat girls gotta stick together
Blazingfox77
2024-06-08 16:48:59 +0000 UTCThose wedge shorts are glorious
Blazingfox77
2024-06-08 15:13:45 +0000 UTCThat’s a good what if
Blazingfox77
2024-06-08 15:13:29 +0000 UTCI really wonder what it would look like if Leo got together with Krissy😅
Softhen94
2024-06-08 14:55:06 +0000 UTCGoddamn how does Masako even get those shorts up
BioYuGi
2024-06-08 14:35:54 +0000 UTCGod I love masako soooo much
Blazingfox77
2024-06-08 09:57:39 +0000 UTC
