Voluptuous Vacation Premiere! (Pages 1-5)
Added 2023-12-28 21:02:41 +0000 UTCA few days late, but hopefully worth the weight!
I suppose the big thing I forgot to mention is that while I tried the webtoon style format I initially mentioned in the announcement post, I found that it wasn't quite to my liking so I switched back to my usual comic page format. It's something I likely should've mentioned in the last couple character profiles while I was working on this, I just admittedly forgot. I hope this isn't a dealbreaker for any readers!
Author Commentary:
-I wanted this whole beginning bit with Kimi worrying about her weight to be an homage to my first comic IN-FAT-UATION, which somehow turns five this next month. Oh, how far these characters have come!
Page 2 Panel 1- This might be the only time where all three of my main comic girls are in a panel at the same time! For those unaware, I've been commissioned to draw a semi-regular comic called "Damaged Goods" on Dr. Black Jack's Patreon. It's a standalone story, but takes place in the Donut Delinquent setting. The main girl, Mika Kamada, is Kimi's predecessor as Student Council President. I don't know quite when it will go public but when it does, I'll be posting it here!
Page 2 Panel 3- Say hello to incidental characters Hiro and Naomi. Hiro is part of the main class in Delinquent, we saw him briefly in page 3, panel 1 of Chapter 6. Naomi meanwhile, has graduated by the time of Delinquent. She's Cassie's roommate. These are the kinds of characters that have no real impact whatsoever on the stories of either comic, they just fill the setting. (until I inevitably decide they get a role lmao)
Page 3 Panel 1: Coming up with fake brands is fun lol.
Page 5, Panels 1,2,3- I already revealed that Kimi was gay in the aborted Girl's Night comic, but I think this is a bit more graceful way of doing it than having Lisbeth just go "Oh Kimi's gay" like I did there.
Wanted this premiere to be a good mix of story and sexy content, hopefully I hit a good balance there. I've got a poll coming up shortly asking how you guys would like to see this comic be published, look out for it soon!
Please enjoy!
Comments
Great start! And you're spoiling us with so many sexy shots of Kimi right off the bat
Axel Laperouge
2023-12-28 22:16:42 +0000 UTCRefer to the poll I just published for more information! :D
TrickTreat
2023-12-28 21:42:25 +0000 UTCThis is nothing more than a serious doubt, how often will it be published or will it be these same pages or just one?
MasterWS
2023-12-28 21:19:17 +0000 UTCAlso hope she finds love during her trip
Blazingfox77
2023-12-28 21:17:45 +0000 UTCDamn this was worth the weight the gains and sexiness is S tier and I can’t wait to see more, also love the slight crossover with the damaged good cutie god she blew up good in high school
Blazingfox77
2023-12-28 21:12:37 +0000 UTCIt looks very interesting and promising, but I don't know why I expected anything more.
MasterWS
2023-12-28 21:11:55 +0000 UTC
