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Added 2023-06-06 00:00:03 +0000 UTCTitle drop! But what does it mean...?
Enjoy! The art style continuation continues. There are certain things I like and certain things I don't that you'll see change off and on over the next few pages, but I'm having fun pushing my style in different ways.
Friday: We return to the school with another physical!
Comments
Yeesh, Ryoko just keeps making herself look worse and worse. 1) Demands her pregnant daughter fire her only employee (who was begging not to be fired due to needing rent money. In front of Ryoko no less) based on the testimony of someone who, while a family friend, described a wildly different person than the girl she saw with her own eyes. 2) Doesn't seem to care about any complications surrounding the selection and hiring process, evidently more interested in getting rid of the girl Lisbeth hates. 3) Does Lisbeth even go to that cafe on the regular? By all accounts, it looks like she typically gorges herself with food from Burger Bat, Hana working there shouldn't even effect her unless she was actively looking to be impacted by such a thing. 4) Hypocrisy. With such character traits, I wonder if part of the reason she likes Lisbeth could be due to a similarity in certain personality traits? Not that she's anywhere near as bad as Lisbeth, as Masako pointed out (and she keeps proving herself to be a great person), Lisbeth's a manipulative little shrew and this is just another example, using ties to ruin the life of someone she hates (if knowledge about this got out to the school, I honestly wonder if she'd be reviled?). EDIT; Placing more blame on Lisbeth here than Ryoko, can't picture Seina befriending her if she was reprehensible- and it took me until just now to realise Hana got a job where her mum was going to work. Also, still far prefer your old method of working with noses and lips. Only a few styles I've seen can make them look good, and they're comic/webcomic artists who've been in the business for over a decade or two. Hell, sometimes people who've been drawing for as long as they have just keep those features simple and it honestly works for the better. Take Axel-rosered, Metalforever and the like. And for a less questionable style of content, the webcomic 'Rusty and Co', the artist's been drawing since 2010 and the only character with prominent lips is the Mimic, while the only characters with detailed noses are Gnolls and Lizardmen.
Scryer
2023-06-06 06:22:34 +0000 UTCThese tachibana girls really do tear up there clothes easily lol yes I see masako butt ripping them stocking
Blazingfox77
2023-06-06 04:30:53 +0000 UTCSo big question is this origin of how Hana becomes the new donut delinquent
Blazingfox77
2023-06-06 01:35:23 +0000 UTCShe’s the title of this story !!!!!!! Mind blown !!!!!!!!
Blazingfox77
2023-06-06 00:11:23 +0000 UTC
