Donut Delinquent Page 106
Added 2023-06-02 23:32:02 +0000 UTCSorry for no page on Monday! Back on schedule!
You might notice things look a little different! I'm experimenting with how I draw character faces right now, giving my characters generally more well defined faces, with more prominent noses, lips and face fat. The next few pages are going to be in a similar style while I play around with this, and I really want your feedback!
Enjoy!
Comments
No worries, mate! Personally, I liked the old noses and lips better. This is, admittedly, due to personally not liking prominent lips, especially on drawn characters. On drawn characters, giving them (especially noses) more realistic depth tends to make the face look cluttered and a little too close to the Uncanny Valley. But in all honesty, good on you for trying something new. Also, this is interesting. Masako said she knew about Hana's living situation, so assuming she didn't tell her mum about it given her reaction. That said, her lack of suspicion regarding Lis' testimony being incongruous with the nervous little bunny begging not to be fired she met yesterday doesn't paint the mother (whose name I can never bloody remember) in the best of lights.
Scryer
2023-06-03 00:20:52 +0000 UTCAlso no worries about the page not making it to Monday take all the time you need thicker
Blazingfox77
2023-06-02 23:37:03 +0000 UTCGive Hana a chance sheβs not all bad plus sheβs has a bigger connection to this family than you think π
Blazingfox77
2023-06-02 23:36:34 +0000 UTC
