Donut Delinquent Page 104
Added 2023-05-23 00:00:00 +0000 UTCOf course, Lisbeth didn't actually balloon into a pink pig monster, that's just what she sees herself as.
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Cristian's Revenge
2024-10-09 16:26:00 +0000 UTCPigs and sexy though hehe
Tory Williams
2023-05-23 23:02:20 +0000 UTCCan’t weight for the next page of piggy Liz
Blazingfox77
2023-05-23 04:57:31 +0000 UTCIt’s almost too big to cover the scale
Blazingfox77
2023-05-23 00:30:20 +0000 UTCAlso, well done on having her belly take on a noticeable red tint out of embarrassment.
WaluigiToast
2023-05-23 00:27:36 +0000 UTCExcellent job on this page, Thicker, just like your other ones! In particular, I enjoy how you rendered her hot breath and pig form. I don't think I've seen you tackle anthropomorphic creatures in your art before, and I think you nailed this one! Additionally, nice touch with changing her uniform's surname from Hanezama to Pig, haha.
WaluigiToast
2023-05-23 00:26:52 +0000 UTCVery big piggy
Blazingfox77
2023-05-23 00:08:46 +0000 UTCHonestly, this is quite cute. And the coach actually seems like a decent guy, so that’s a plus. Having trouble feeling sorry for Lis after the previous few pages admittedly. Turns out there’s a type of narcissism where the individual thinks of themselves in a negative light. (Personal opinion of her character, still love the story and think her place within it works quite well, don’t get me wrong.) Case in point, she keeps thinking ‘woe is me’ when she knows for a fact that Leo’s entire family is fat, so him being repulsed makes no sense. Same with how he didn’t react in the slightest to the story about Hana stuffing herself before realising she liked his cooking. But honestly, you’ve done a good job at making her a compelling character. She’s more than just the ‘nice, timid friend’ trope and that’s honestly a good thing, it means she has depth.
Scryer
2023-05-23 00:04:50 +0000 UTCPiggie
Trashly.bin
2023-05-23 00:03:16 +0000 UTCTo be fair she’s a beautiful piglet btw nice way you drew her as a piggy
Blazingfox77
2023-05-23 00:01:38 +0000 UTC
