Donut Delinquent Chapter 1 "Final Edit"
Added 2022-03-29 20:06:16 +0000 UTCHeyo! So attached here is my "Final Edit" of Donut Delinquent Chapter 1.
Being my own editor, I often overlook errors, clunky speech, or panels that should get a do-over until after the fact, and while I've caught a few here and there and made edits over the past few months, I decided to sit down a few days ago and go over the entire thing one more time, adding as much polish as I can before putting a final seal of approval on it and trying my best not to do it again and become George Lucas lmao.
The story content of the chapter is the exact same, and basically all of the edits are just making the speech bubbles look better and giving the character introductions a bit more thematic "pop" to them! I have redrawn a couple panels though, to look better and for one, to add a character who will be super relevant later...
I'll be updating the pages across Patreon and Deviantart soon to reflect these edits, but that's something that'll take a few hours and I'd rather work on art at the moment lmao.
Overall, consider this to just be a nifty way to download all of Chapter 1 in one place! Enjoy!
Comments
I think I spotted the new character, at the very beginning. Not 100% sure though
Oim8
2022-03-29 22:58:32 +0000 UTCGuessing it works now my phone must be mixing up the pages by mistake
Blazingfox77
2022-03-29 20:33:16 +0000 UTCAh, they are? Looks fine on my end when I download it, which pages are mixed up?
TrickTreat
2022-03-29 20:30:35 +0000 UTCJust aheads up the first few pages in the beginning are mixed up
Blazingfox77
2022-03-29 20:22:49 +0000 UTC
