Donut Delinquent Page 8
Added 2021-07-11 19:00:26 +0000 UTCWas gonna save this for monday, but got impatient! New Donut Delinquent time!
First off, I want to point everyone back to page Six and Seven. I gave it some thought and came to the conclusion that they really didn't meet the quality standards I want this comic to have, especially compared to the prologue. The dialogue felt a little wrong, and a lot of the panels suffered from a pretty severe lack of background detail. I didn't like portraying the Tachibanas as living in a violet void, especially when the scenes take place in a busy kitchen. So yeah! Check those out!
On to the page itself...
-I somehow managed to do not just one, but three butt shots in this page, right after lamenting my inability to draw them back in the Zelda pic lol. Ryoko and Lisbeth of course have absolutely immense rears, but I thought I'd give Leo a pretty fat bubble butt as well. As I've said before he won't be gaining weight in this story, but that won't stop me from giving him at least one curvy asset lmao.
-Lisbeth! My fat little nerd makes her appearance at last, struggling up the hill towards the Tachibana Bakery... The town they live in is pretty hilly, much to her chagrin. Usually, she'd get rides from her childhood friend Kimi, but she's going overseas...
-Kimi, you say? That's right, another one of my girls will be appearing this chapter, but It's not much more than a guest appearance...
Enjoy!
Comments
First of all, I keep seeing you around. You have good taste. Secondly, since this post might not make sense to anyone who did not see the initial version; she originally tossed out the donuts and replaced them.
Scryer
2021-07-20 08:10:13 +0000 UTCHehehe... Well, all I can say is this is going to be quite the emotional rollercoaster of a story lol
TrickTreat
2021-07-14 21:46:23 +0000 UTCWonderful to see Liz again! Though this does bring one worry to my mind though, how does the love triangle between her, Leo, and Hana work? I'm saying it because the idea of Leo rejecting her breaks my heart
Kitshock
2021-07-14 19:58:23 +0000 UTCAlso what a waste of donuts damn it girl it she should snacked on them
Blazingfox77
2021-07-11 19:38:37 +0000 UTCI think you have done a great job on drawing those butts, the immense rears of both lisbeth and ryoko but also the perky butt of leo.
Oim8
2021-07-11 19:25:09 +0000 UTCMy god that belly
Blazingfox77
2021-07-11 19:24:06 +0000 UTCHere's hoping there might be a few easter eggs during Kimi's appearance, haha;
WaluigiToast
2021-07-11 19:07:59 +0000 UTC
