Donut Delinquent Prologue (Pages 1-5)
Added 2021-06-15 00:46:21 +0000 UTCAfter nearly a year in the works and quite the wild ride getting here, I'm proud to finally premiere my new comic, Donut Delinquent!
Here you'll see the entire five-page prologue, featuring our two leads ten years before the story starts in a chance meeting that forever ties the red string of fate between them...
-I decided to go ahead and get the entire prologue drawn before I posted it, as I felt it would work better as one cohesive piece to set the tone for the story instead of posting each page as I finished them.
-Writing dialogue for kids is difficult. Thankfully, these are the only pages I'll have to be doing it for lol.
-While I wanted to keep this prologue very fanservice-free for obvious reasons, I of course wanted to give you guys something in the form of Leo's mom in tight sweatpants lol. I kinda fell in love with this younger look for her, and I might do some pinups of her younger design in the future!
- For a brief moment I considered adding a younger Lisbeth to the mix, being dragged along by Ryoko to try and find Leo, but I decided that her introduction in the present day would be good enough, and I didn't want to take away from the meeting between Hana and Leo.
I hope everyone enjoys the start to this comic! I've been eager to get it going for so long now, and I'm so happy to finally cross the starting line! Now to make sure I manage to keep going with it ^_^'
Expect page six sometime this week!
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P.S the second part of the Ramona Flowers WG sequence is slightly delayed, I got really into finishing this prologue and decided to put it off for a couple days. Expect it to be posted either tomorrow or Wednesday alongside the Scott Pilgrim pinup.
Comments
Oh my god it's so cute!
Bailey G
2021-06-17 05:39:57 +0000 UTCAww, this is so wholesome!
Trashly.bin
2021-06-16 02:02:11 +0000 UTCThanks! :D Eventually bringing back this sweet Hana will definitely be a pillar of the story lol
TrickTreat
2021-06-16 00:42:46 +0000 UTCThanks! :D
TrickTreat
2021-06-16 00:42:15 +0000 UTCThanks! :D
TrickTreat
2021-06-16 00:41:54 +0000 UTCThanks! And also thanks for the concern regarding burnout. I'd like to think I've got a pretty good grasp on my pacing right now, but I'll definitely be trying to slow myself down if I start feeling it even just a little, just to prevent a complete collapse like previous times.
TrickTreat
2021-06-16 00:41:46 +0000 UTCThanks! :D
TrickTreat
2021-06-16 00:39:53 +0000 UTCSo far its turing out really cute and great can't wait to see more
Starlight Blaze
2021-06-15 11:10:18 +0000 UTCAwwww, this extremely sweet and a very nice setup, I adore the idea of "Destiny brought us together even before we knew it" also, the fact that Hana was a very sweet and caring child is bound to make Leo want to break that tough exterior and bring back that sweet girl, which is just too wonderful for me! Amazing job on the prologue
Kitshock
2021-06-15 04:09:12 +0000 UTCAwe so cute and sweet
Blazingfox77
2021-06-15 01:39:09 +0000 UTCI’m… not entirely sure it’s legal to make something this sweet. That’s a good thing, to the extent that I wouldn’t complain if you kept up what you’ve planned for a year or switched course completely to a story about these two just being incredibly precious. Especially Hana, she’s an adorable, sweet, appreciative, incredibly timid little bunny who deserves to be hugged and protected. This is phenomenal thus far and the other images were delayed for a worthy cause, but please don’t burn yourself out.
Scryer
2021-06-15 01:20:56 +0000 UTCHYPE! I like how this is starting off 😉
Steelmaker
2021-06-15 00:55:56 +0000 UTC
