The Debtor's Corral
Added 2023-06-06 17:57:55 +0000 UTCComments
Yeah, I mentioned it but hadn't thought it all the way through. I'm imagining some kind of religio-fascist gov't that wants to emphasize the pain and looks askance at the sex part. So men might just be sent off to the coal-and-asbestos mine-and-factory complex to be abused as short-lived human air filters. Don't know if I have a plan to really flesh out this world, though. -_O_-
Xavier Torch
2023-06-16 20:05:47 +0000 UTCI enjoyed the story. It's nice and short, but well written and the world makes sense inside of it. I would recommend a reference to something similar to men, as it would not make sense to me for 50% of the population to not be exploited like the other half.
Jam
2023-06-16 18:43:46 +0000 UTCIt's always possible. These are a little smoother, when the urge to write them strikes, than Talla's Temple or even a THD chapter. If there are enough likes, I guess I could build a little dystopian world. Would I follow Andrea? Deirdre and her husband? Take random episodes like Twilight Zone or CSI?
Xavier Torch
2023-06-07 22:43:30 +0000 UTCAny plans for a sequel to this?
Wendell Gray
2023-06-07 22:41:56 +0000 UTC
