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Chapter 79 Tanesha

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Hi I really like the chapter and the new greyer/darker tone of the mc.

Aulibaba

Mysaria was a interesting character house of the dragon if she chose aegon instead of daemon, he could probaly give her exactly what she wanted

Thomas Rayner

If she succeeds in becoming a wizard she won't be one for long with the life Devouring properties of magic powerπŸ˜‘

Thomas Rayner

That was a very interesting chapter.

Hannan Potashman

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Razvan Peles

slightly? lol XD

Gopard

right I agree but he does have plot armour. Thats the thing. He has no need to be unnecessarily cruel and ruthless when he already has a full grown dragon, the backing of the targ dynasty at its zenith and magical powers that make him the peak of power

gort

I like the tone of the chapter. A lot of people are going to be pissed if the Wizard is the MC, which is obviously hinted that he is. But personally I liked the chapter. It never feels real when you have a goody two shoes MC. Like we live in the modern world, we know how fucked up are people in general. The good people are used and discarded by bad people, you have to know to be able to stand up and do things. Any weak minded MC would have been killed in a fantasy world without plot armor. So keep it up, love the story.

Jorge

I think this is very obviously the corruption of the Magic Sea; it's insidious work. It's even more horrific if he doesn't even realize the changes occurring quietly over time.

Mr. Bigglesworth

ASIOF world isn’t a place where the hero / good guy wins. Lots of people seem to only want a Neutral to good MC but I don’t mind this direction. Thanks for the chapter

Riptide

Yeah honestly if this is going the way I think it does this is going to be worse than Daenerys Targaryen from the show

zenot funr

Ignore the others. People GOT universe is ruled through power. Hopefully after some testing is done he can power up some family members he likes. Corlys Velaryon would probably swear fealty if he or his children could learn some water magic or something for their ships

Kluvial

Man this seems way out of character for Aegon. Maybe this is the antagonist? But i ain't gonna root for a main character who tortures innocents

gort

He has class that changes how people think but it needs time to take effect, and she doesn't have classes which will make harder to break free and she is trapped on island.

Amosz

I mean his morality was degrading and his ambitions ever growing, so it's actually possible for this to happrn, especially after 2 year timeskip where something happened and then pushed him over edge.

Amosz

I hope there is twist where cursed murk wasn't made by Aegon but another reincarnator. To be honest another person from earth who give up morally would be nice contrast and meaby villain. They would contrast mc by beging born at the bottom, giving up morality to survive, fighting for resources, beging a gamer instead of dev. Having skill tree from released game, wich will be more refined, updated, but more restrive due to game balance. I wonder how would they interact.

Amosz

This is crazy if tanesha now has spirituality and the meditation technique what makes aegon think that she wont break the brand in like a week? just like how aegon spent a few days to understand the shadow runes he has just started studying magic for like two years he has practically zero lead on her who knows what kinds of runes she can find that might easily be able to be used to break the brand.

John

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Gilgamesh

This chapter feels slightly out of character. Aegon was against experimenting on bloodlines and on humans, because of morality and because it was related how Valyria has fallen. If MC continues with slavery another faceless cult may form, or factions against old Valyria may focus on him once they investigate. Aegon through story was slowly begin morally degrading but this is a big leap.

Amosz

This is awesome, start of the wizarding world or seed through which mages will grow

Leery Falcon

I agree. He doesen't have to be some saviour that people follow out of the good of their hearts and people flock to him like a god, but damn him controlling everyone out of straight mind slavery and with 100% fear is eh. If its limited to a select group that serves him, I'm fine w that. But if it goes further than that, what's stopping him from just murdering everyone who pisses him off lol and stepping over viserys/daemon and his other family brutally.

Omgitsbakon

so if this is what I'm thinking it is... I'll be dropping the story... which is a shame... but if Aegon suddenly started randomly using slaves and human experiments in torture and murder because, you know morality and stuff is just something every MC has to automatically lose after a certain amount of chapters ot doesn't matter if it goes against what he did before right? then I'll drop it... I dearly hope this isn't Aegons doing or that there'll be some circumstances we don't know yet... with it as is? I don't know why you think this is a good turn for the story... os it just because he is a Valyrian? and all of them are by genetics psychopaths or something? please don't let this be what I think it is fuck... I really hope it's not that because the story would have gone from one of my favorites to in one chapter me almost certainly dropping it. this right here would be about as jarring for as if you were instead writing how Aegon just killed his grandparents and father to claim the throne... that's level of WTF I am at right now lmfao

Gopard

if that's Aegon I have to admit I'll drop the story.. though it seems very likely what with the wording of the "wizards" power and spirituality... but this would come super out of left field like wtf???? Not only HOW did he possibly hide this and manage to sneak away from Royal minders to even set this all up. However the biggest thing is WHY???? Like how does Aegon go from "relatively normal guy okay suddenly sure driven to get stronger with classes" to "enslaving and torturing and murdering innocent people"? it isn't only the sailors and "knights" after all (those might well be criminals) but specifically innocent people too..?

Gopard

Oho, our MC is building a secret army/society in the background

EsZeus

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Castiel001

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