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[WIP] A Dance with Carmine (Page 1) (Request)

Added 2024-09-09 16:31:57 +0000 UTC

Just the first panel for now + variants, because I've expanded the scope of the first panel. Obviously in the full comic page I'll have to crop her so I can fit in the 2nd panel while the full illustration is an extra aka the preview for this project. Speaking of which, I envision the 2nd panel to be her showing her tits, flirting with the viewer (You), and saying "...do you want something else?" The overall dialog would likely change to Panel 1: "Would you like to try this mochi..." Panel 2: "Or this mochi." (Talking about her tits). What do you think? Second, there's a reason why there's 2 variant sketches of Carmine in her Jinbei here. I found the rather long pants version of her jinbei from her original game to be unsightly, so I shortened it to show off her thighs, as she's a tall girl I want to show it off. What do you think? Short pants jinbei or long pants jinbei (original)? Finally, because of the complex nature of this request it will probably take a while (mostly because of her outfit tbh).