Under the Kotatsu - Zuko & Sokka (cover art)
Added 2023-05-10 04:46:53 +0000 UTCHere is the first look at the cover page for my Zukka comic. I tried my best to give it something extra to grab people's attention. Does the text look alright, or is it too much? Lemme know what thoughts you may have. I'll be releasing the final colored comic on Friday!
Comments
I would say it is a bit busy. The main problem I think is the R18. The way it blends with the words 'under the' to create darker patches kind of blends it with the wooden slats of the background when they interact with the same text. I think the r18 dojin logo is not under copyright (I'm not sure) if it is free to use, putting it in the top or bottom left of the cover would be good if you wanted to keep it.
Smitty
2023-05-10 19:36:00 +0000 UTCThe text is fine to my untrained eye. Everything has its own weight even tho it's all clustered. Excited for teh finished product!
Jacob
2023-05-10 05:37:53 +0000 UTC
