Alright guys Im not sure if its from covid or what Ive been rather fatigued this month so havent done as much work on Babel as id hoped and have paused billing, thankyou all of you who have supported this patreon in the past or continue to do so, ive attached the storyboard sketches ive got so far but theres a lot lot more to do, i will resume once i feel ive done enough work to justify it, watch this space for more as i go..
you can see the basic story but there are lots of gaps id like to fill and improve whats already in place.. approaching babel and entering the city, and the plaza of the tower and its adjacent temple (perhaps following a falling star toward the city; the impact crater and the star being moved to the top of the temple maybe here too), climbing the tower, the moon and sun passing below, (need a downshot between dangling feet of Babylon far below, i have images of the layout of the city then, and more of the people pulling their cart etc) the tower aiming for the heavens, approaching the star, reaching for the star (one possible ending of the story) the staircase being extended up into the carved out star (several more showing the mine workings needed here) the mine workings striking bedrock, then cut blocks of stone, penetrating the stone, putting a ladder up to the opening and climbing, emerging into the plaza at the base of the tower, the star visible atop the temple, its an every day scene with grey light, hustle and bustle, panoramic to show the city reachin away to the mountains, the clouds, the tower reaching above. the end
Tyler Leto
2022-05-24 22:02:42 +0000 UTC