Quaranteam: SE - Team Davies Ch. 19
Added 2025-10-02 10:00:10 +0000 UTCQuaranteam: Southeast – Team Davies
By 2c
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Yeah, I think one other reader pointed this out to me as well. Sadly, I rarely get around to corrective edits after final versions post. I'll try to get to this one, thought. Thanks for your feedback!
2Charlie
2025-10-21 14:00:18 +0000 UTCI'm surprised that I haven't commented earlier, but I'm reminded of an old salt company motto: "when it rains, it pours" - I got caught up one or more of those, before I got back to reread this chapter. The sex is hot, and the character development is good, too, and I only found one tiny nit to pick: you used the word "chaffed", when I thing you meant "chafed". "Chafe" means "to rub the wrong way", basically, while "chaff" is the husk of most grains, usually recycled or at best used as roughage. I imagine he's be even MORE irritated if he was sprinkled with chaff, but for entirely different reasons in the story. Aside from that, it's a high-nutrition chapter, feeding us in multiple ways!
Fumtu
2025-10-19 05:45:33 +0000 UTC
