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Chapter 231 - 104 Gaw(Franky): Conflict

Enjoy and please comment. Next chapter is going to be pure, crazy, combat fun.

Chapter 231 - 104 Gaw(Franky): Conflict

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Be harsh. Honest opinions help me improve. I'll take your comments to heart and will look into upping the chapter quality.

Quasi Eludo

Thanks for the chapter.

Joshua Little

This is a very odd cliff to hang on, and half a chapter going about Gunwidow, with nothing from the lady herself leaves a bad taste for me. Sorry to be harsh, but the whole chapter feels like a half baked outline and completely below your usual standard, I would rather you take a couple more days to do it justice than get an idea pitch for something that could be fun to read someday.

Arnon Parenti


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