I want to say so much, but I won't cause it may spoil the story for you. Sowwy.
Quasi Eludo
2019-04-16 19:29:19 +0000 UTC
My point is. You could add your own touch in harem story. And i would be very excited to see child born from egg 🥚. I also like peter
2019-04-15 18:47:06 +0000 UTC
but I would advice you author to limit the sex or make it more orderly . I mean the mc is old person and I would think he would like stable life. So he could get married and have kids early on in the story. They could live in different houses because women tend to like to have their own houses and it is not like every woman is hungry for orgy.
2019-04-15 18:43:08 +0000 UTC
Wow good story telling. I have never thought I would like info dumbing that much. Also you created believable background of the fight.