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Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set)

Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set) Rinko Tries To Stop Her Son's BBC Bully (Tier 3+ Captioned Set)

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Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the feedback. i will see if i can incorporate it.

Exogenz

THIS IS SOOOO GOOD, genuinely worth the wait , when I saw the notifications about the captioned set I upgraded my membership in about 3,2 seconds lmao Your gen style combines so well with captions, I really liked how you made Rinko kinda dubious in the start and then she kinda started getting into it, maybe we can get a part 2 in the future if you feel like it IMO It would massively improve the quality in future sets if you added some pages as intro in the beginning to set the mood , just characters interacting with each other about the scenario . In this one, for example, you could have added Rinko talking to her son about the bullying and as she's about to confront his bully she notices his bulge and how muscular he looks . This would only add like 2-3 extra pages but I think it would make the overall quality improve. If you want some inspiration check out Contingency and his works, he's the best at using a low ammount of space/pages to set the tone and showcase why the characters are about to fuck/have fucked

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