Chapter 12 Part 1 Sketches
Added 2021-11-16 15:17:23 +0000 UTCKiri doesn't know how to process her feelings, be patient with her! SHe kinda goes through all the grieving stages this chapter. part 1; isolation
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I really like the way you delve into the characters' thoughts and emotions to create a more well-rounded picture of who they are and how they are affected by the events surrounding them. A pure action/romance would be fun but a more-complete story is far more interesting.
Bill Meahan
2021-11-16 15:30:38 +0000 UTC
