Script: Chapter 1
Added 2020-12-12 14:37:27 +0000 UTCAlright hopefully this works better than just pasting the entire chapter as a text post or smth. If you're able to edit plz let me know because it's not supposed to do that ;;
anyway enjoy! I know I'm not the best writer, and there are for sure a bunch of mistakes, but in my defense it only needed to be coherent enough to translate to a comic.
Comments
Wow, it so cool to see the changes from the script to the comic! It's interesting how originally, Maria threatened to kill Kiri, and I'm kinda glad you cut that part out, since it seems a little outrageous to me that Kiri would fall in love with someone who threatened to kill her lol. Great work!
2022-06-02 02:37:45 +0000 UTCThis is so good. π
sammy junk
2020-12-15 17:52:51 +0000 UTC![Martin Gunnarsson [ Deerstranger ]](https://nokimo.com/istorage/44146.jpg)
