-Early Access- Captive comic Chapter 3 (page 19-22)
Added 2023-11-30 20:55:54 +0000 UTCI just finished page 4 a minute ago so I might edit it a little bit later (I usually ask my partner to correct my text to make it more smooth to read but he is playing LOL and I'm too excited that I finally started this chapter! I couldn't waiiiit haha!)!!
It is almost 10 pm here and I slept about 4 hours last night so I'm sorry if I make a lot of typo and I don't sound that logical haha!
I hope you'll like this first few pages!! This chapter will be between 38 to 40 pages long! :) (yes...I'm still editing a bit my last pages)
A huge thank you to Jules who is my amazing beta reader since the second chapter! Also a huge thank you to JD who helped for the spanish sentences (which happen later in this chapter!)
Comments
That house looks amazing and I can see Miguel sleeping in pjs??? Double the amazing ❤️
Tay Ying
2023-12-03 04:40:24 +0000 UTCI am happy you spotted all the details! I want to add more if I have time to rework some pages! He is so loaded haha! Just by seeing the spider society building and all the rooms and things there are!! I wanted to add some hc I jave for so long haha! Peter's puppy eyes power is too powerful indeed ❤
yakichou
2023-12-02 19:22:43 +0000 UTCAAAAAH I’M IN LOVE WITH HOW YOU MADE HIS LIVING ROOM 😩 i see the Green Goblin Mask, Mjölnir, and the golden DNA strand trophy(?) sitting on the shelves 👀 ya know, sometimes i forget that Migs is rich lol ALSO THE PORTRAITS… CRYING AND SOBBING IN THE CLUB 🩵 no one can win against the Parker Patented Puppy Dog Eyes™️ , even the toughest of hearts fall victim to its power 😂💀
gaygerthelame
2023-12-02 18:53:38 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!! 🥰💕
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:59:44 +0000 UTCBeautiful artwork in this. Wow. That room!
Brookie
2023-12-01 06:53:54 +0000 UTCI'll try to post an update weekly :)
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:25:39 +0000 UTCI'll add a little bit of context about this person in my bonus pages :) I used a luxury design picture cause my brain was too empty haha! I wanted to show his wealth :)
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:25:20 +0000 UTCI hope you'll like this chapter!! <3
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:24:10 +0000 UTCI'm glad you love it!!!
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:23:40 +0000 UTCFlawless as always!! Eagerly awaiting the next updates 🥰
Kae
2023-11-30 23:37:49 +0000 UTCOh! The person in the photos! Are we going to get a backstory about them one day? And I love the design of Miguel’s home. The floor-to-ceiling bookshelf is amazing!
Hallokatzchen
2023-11-30 23:19:28 +0000 UTCaaah chou this is so cute i can't wait to see what comes next! 👀❤️
J D
2023-11-30 22:40:32 +0000 UTCI love the HC that’s so sweet but so sad 😭 I’m so excited! I will be patiently waiting! 🫶🏻🤩
Rex
2023-11-30 21:30:58 +0000 UTCI love it kicking my lil feet
Mystic moxi art
2023-11-30 21:23:52 +0000 UTCNEW POST LET'S GO 🦗🦟🦗🦟🦗🦟
KhonoJeya ✨
2023-11-30 21:18:31 +0000 UTCOf course!! 🥹 Just lmk
EXCOMMXNICADO
2023-11-30 21:15:28 +0000 UTCPeter is, once again, a big cutie 🥺💕💕💕💕
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:13:22 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! I will keep that in mind 🥺
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:12:48 +0000 UTCPeter face!!! Love his puppy eyes! Too cute for his own good.
Madame Kaede Yagami
2023-11-30 21:11:33 +0000 UTCMiggy had a very sweet life before all of this! But a lot happened since! I didnt developed his earlier life in this story since this not the focus! I just wanted to drop some HC haha! I wanted to show he is super duper rich haha! This chapter will be full spiderdads 🥰
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:09:04 +0000 UTCOMMGG SLAAAYYY THO HE LOOKS GREAT I LOVE THIS SM?!?! 😳 also omg I would love that!! 🫣 If you ever need help or someone to read over your writing I can help 🫰🏻
EXCOMMXNICADO
2023-11-30 21:05:02 +0000 UTCChou you’re so badass 😭🥰
SpookySalem
2023-11-30 21:04:52 +0000 UTCAww that makes me happy! I forgot to add some details so I might add them in a couple of days when I will recover from all the hard work I did haha
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:04:23 +0000 UTCThank you!! It took me 5 hours to work on it haha!
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:03:09 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! 🥺💕💕💕
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:02:30 +0000 UTCOHHHHH MY GOD THE EX SPOUSE???? AND THEY’RE PREGNANT AHHHH I’m so excited for this chapter! Also his apartment looks so good I’m in love with it and Miguel’s face and Peter’s face 🥰🫶🏻🧡
Rex
2023-11-30 21:02:18 +0000 UTCHehehehe I wanted to add him for so looong! I should make more time to write more about him but I have so many projects already haha
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:01:45 +0000 UTCGod I keep looking at all the details and keep seeing more; nice touch with Mjølnir 👀
SpookySalem
2023-11-30 21:01:17 +0000 UTCI have some very precise HC about his before spiderman life haha! I had had some of them in this comic 🥰
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:01:02 +0000 UTCAlso love the background!!!
Cicci Palle
2023-11-30 20:58:34 +0000 UTCTHE FRAMES CHOU WHYYYYYYY (holy shit these are so good 😭😭)
SpookySalem
2023-11-30 20:58:12 +0000 UTCOH HELLO??? Previous partner alert??
Cicci Palle
2023-11-30 20:57:57 +0000 UTCOMMGG THE APPEARANCE OF MIGUEL'S SPPOUUSSEEE 😭😭😭
EXCOMMXNICADO
2023-11-30 20:57:48 +0000 UTC
