Soul Collision
Added 2022-03-25 21:38:49 +0000 UTCThe heel is on the other foot!
Commissioned by a patron.
Comments
Okay, the incosistency is: Panel 3: Girl has this long black dress, which is on the front and back long. Panel 4: Suddenly the dress is on the back short (propably because you want to show the ass ;) ) Panel 5: The dress is much brighter, more greyish instead of black and it looks like it's shorter on the front. This is propably because the dress is folded up on the legs. Main issue is here only the color. Panel 6: Here we have the same dress on Panel 6. But I just reognized the boobs appear to big. The should be flattened because of gravity ;) Panel 7: This picture gives the impression that both just waked up, but for the girl is the dress missing. I doubt that she took it off while sleeping ;) Maybe this could be easily fixed if you would draw dress just in front of her, on the bed. Then she might have just taken off her dress in a panic when she woke up. Or even mor realstic, the dress is just half taken off, behind her head. But I don't think you have to fix this sequence. None of this things is super dramatic.
stger
2022-03-26 15:01:37 +0000 UTCI'm quite willing to fix both the belly size and these three images. If I may take a moment of time, what do you see wrong with the three images?
Zac Crockett
2022-03-26 14:34:56 +0000 UTCi like transfpormatiuons better but great work
Stormfries
2022-03-26 11:58:00 +0000 UTCI would prefer that you fix the belly size in CURSED instead of these one, if you would fix something :)
stger
2022-03-26 11:03:52 +0000 UTCAny recommendations on how I may modify those three images to be more consistent?
Zac Crockett
2022-03-25 22:57:17 +0000 UTCIt was intended to be. I guess I didn't quite pull that off, I guess? :)
Zac Crockett
2022-03-25 22:44:49 +0000 UTCIs it intended that the girl has different clohtes while sleeping on panel 5, 6 and 7?
stger
2022-03-25 22:15:19 +0000 UTC
