Lost and Found Club Chapter 1
Added 2024-04-01 02:19:25 +0000 UTCI've done a lot learning in regards to inking throughout this whole process. The slight quality inconsistencies from page to page should be ironed out by next time. And should be much faster too.
Anyway, now that it's here, I'll be in the comments wondering what you guys think so far.
Comments
YEAHHH HERE IT GO
Val Salia
2024-04-04 21:07:30 +0000 UTCHmm... is it a deer egg, a wolf egg, or... an easter egg? π€
Little Napoleon
2024-04-02 17:33:19 +0000 UTCHey CoraBlue, did you see my DM?
Kullax
2024-04-01 06:59:10 +0000 UTCFINALLY!!!
WarFox
2024-04-01 04:40:06 +0000 UTCExcited for more, like others have already mentioned, also loving the mix of story + sexy. Especially for a chapter 1, sometimes people will write in a manner thats grindingly slow for several chapters then ramp into all sex all the time. But I think this first chapter strikes a good balance of an opening development stuff but still gives us a taste of some of that sweet sweet kink
Skai
2024-04-01 04:37:42 +0000 UTCLikewise, enjoying the mix of story and sexy, for me (and hopefully you as well) having interesting characters dealing with their changes and reacting to the people around them keeps things interesting. But also egg laying is super hot <3
Scotch
2024-04-01 03:55:47 +0000 UTCIf you want my feedback I think its really cool. I like the story you're mixing in. It doesnt need sexy-sexy all the time, and I think you're showing a good narrative here for aftermath and an overarching plot. Will other chapters touch on the other members of the cast? Like Jack (y'know the one that got smol as well) Also I think its cool you included Palmyra at the end there, really like how she ties in and how her story from Arcadia also ties in.
AllyTheotter
2024-04-01 02:33:25 +0000 UTCI see the clipped speech bubble! I'll fix it before I upload to the website tomorrow!
CoraBlue
2024-04-01 02:27:02 +0000 UTC
