Reading "Out of the Woods" by Caro Claire Burke
Added 2021-09-01 14:01:03 +0000 UTC
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See i usually dont like stories that go into large detail using like a page or two just to describe one scene. But this one really weaved all the thoughts,plot,and painted a scene so seemlesly like the part where he had a panic attack and he described the dream. We would just weave into the womans thoughts then back to his explanation then into the mannerisms in how he told it! Being able to paint a picture while also moving along the story is crazy hard stuff story telling wise. Also love the addition of the SFX like the dishes clanking and the music i hope you continue that in the other storys. Lovley reading overall!
That guy
2021-09-28 22:54:28 +0000 UTC"a mutual obsession with the dead air between us" that's marvelous
smopecakes
2021-09-03 02:57:31 +0000 UTCYour voice is insane.
bobbbbby
2021-09-02 20:51:24 +0000 UTC
