November Game Over
Added 2024-11-04 11:29:47 +0000 UTCSorry, I had forgotten to do the Game Overs.
Tell me your ideas and then I'll put them to the vote.
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Good fanfic. It would have taken you hours to write it.
Valeria the Pagan Priestess
2024-11-05 01:39:39 +0000 UTCCould you list it? I'm having a hard time understanding the idea. I don't understand, she has the zombie on top of her and she can dig on top of it?
Valeria the Pagan Priestess
2024-11-05 01:24:56 +0000 UTCThe world around Valeria began to blur, her vision pulsing red as she stumbled. She tried to rise, her blade slipping from her fingers as her knees met the cold, damp earth. The roar of the monstrous fiend before her echoed in her ears, mingling with the rapid beats of her heart. Her body ached from the wounds slashed across her pale, exposed skin. She had fought valiantly, but this land had no mercy for those who hesitated. The creature, a grotesque amalgamation of sinew and nightmare, towered above her. Its eyes glimmered with wicked triumph as it moved forward, its massive, clawed hands reaching down for the wounded priestess. Valeria, always one to wear her defiance on her lips, spat a mouthful of blood, cursing the creature with every foul word she knew. Yet her strength betrayed her, her words becoming little more than a desperate whisper. The beast's claws dug into her flesh, raking over her sides as it hoisted her effortlessly off the ground. Her back arched involuntarily, her muscles straining, a raw gasp escaping her lips. Her leather straps, already torn from battle, gave way easily under the creature's grip, baring her fully to the night's cold air. Pain mingled with the sensation of her vulnerability, her fierce spirit warring against the helplessness of her body. "Fuck... you..." she hissed, her emerald eyes locking on the creature's face, even as she felt its rough tongue run up the length of her neck. It was a predator savoring its prize, the scent of blood and fear hanging heavily in the air. The beast's hunger was clear, its claws shredding the last vestiges of her armor, leaving Valeria completely exposed. Her skin bore the marks of their brutal skirmish—a testament to her determination, even in the face of overwhelming odds. The thing's breath was hot against her ear, a rancid pant that made her want to retch. Her struggles intensified, her muscles flexing with every ounce of strength she had left, but the creature's grip was relentless. It pressed her against the rough stone wall, her cheek grazing against the cold, moss-covered surface. The sensation of her breasts pressed painfully against the stone sent a jolt through her; every nerve ending seemed on fire, each scrape and bruise amplifying her frustration and rage. Valeria fought for control, her mind reeling. She had faced death before. But this? This was worse than any death she could imagine. The creature's claws roamed her body, and she felt the sharp sting of its intentions—an invasion that was more than just the physical. It was stripping her of her pride, her dignity. She bit her lip until she tasted blood, her muffled cries breaking through the silence. But deep within her, Valeria knew this wasn't the end. Her journey had been about power, about vengeance, about proving that this wretched world couldn't break her spirit. Even as the beast's claws tightened, even as her body trembled beneath its strength, she swore—to the gods, to herself, to the darkness around her—that she would return. And she would make this monster pay tenfold for every moment of her agony. The screen faded to black, the crimson text dripping down the center of the void. GAME OVER Valeria's whispered voice echoed in the dark: "This isn't over, you ugly fucking bastard... I'll be back for you."
Garrett Thompson IV
2024-11-04 21:42:11 +0000 UTCI'll just reuse mine from last time. Zombies: Valeria struggles to push a zombie away from her before she falls to the ground with the zombie on top of her who starts digging in. As Valeria struggles to try and escape, two more zombies walk in who also start digging in her, covering her up aside from her kicking legs.
jurgen
2024-11-04 20:24:47 +0000 UTC-Gruesome: as a callback to classic heroine peril, as well as the Intro of Desert Strike (https://youtu.be/FfoVNb9KToE?si=peLtF4f-Ce5zrg_t&t=69) and the Game Over of Spiderman vs The Kingpin (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V4tqjFalWY0&t=408s), have Valeria being lowered to a vat of acid (or just being lowered to acid in the actual acid pit). Added bonus if she’s lifted again to show off her cleaned skeleton. Double added bonus if after a second the skeleton falls apart and the bones fall into the acid again.
Mannyf_F
2024-11-04 16:03:07 +0000 UTCWell, three ideas come to mind, a kinky one, a gruesome one and a funny one: -Kinky: since the main antagonist is a slaver and slavery seems to be one of the overarching elements of the story, or at least the setting, show the defeated and restrained Valeria, maybe on her knees, being sold at a slave auction. For added insult, you can have the eventual buyer taking her away, perhaps by the horned lady from the bar. It would be a nice contrast between she being led by the hand by Valeria and now Valeria being led in chains by her. It would also set a precedent about how power dynamics work on the setting that was already somewhat explored with the Punga Game Over: even apparently friendly people WILL take advantage of Valeria if she shows any weakness.
Mannyf_F
2024-11-04 16:02:53 +0000 UTCIdk, maybe they kill her and parade her body around, if it’s not already implemented yet
Roughdragon1999
2024-11-04 15:32:10 +0000 UTCI personally like the more bloody ones, gives that grim feeling
Roughdragon1999
2024-11-04 15:24:09 +0000 UTChttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0st6RnXE2Mg
Valeria the Pagan Priestess
2024-11-04 13:51:23 +0000 UTCNot sure how to describe this but. Maybe Valeria gets captured by enemies (not sure which ones yet. maybe just bandits) and is forced to work at a bar in a bunny girl outfit. The drunk enemies humiliate Valeria. Maybe one slaps her ass and she gets angry while they all laugh at her.
Bobby Jackerson
2024-11-04 13:45:24 +0000 UTCBandits celebrating by parading Valeria's body around.
Game Salamander
2024-11-04 12:14:56 +0000 UTC
