These are the more or less worked out pages at least as far as dialogue is concerned. The art is in various stages, but I feel like I've decided on a through line. I changed the color of the narration bubbles so they are distinct from actual spoken dialogued, just for clarity. I wouldn't normally do so since I know which is which but now that these are being exhibited I suppose it's better to keep the external reader in mind.
Zaru
2023-10-22 05:28:35 +0000 UTC